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IGCSE Edexcel Language B (QP) Y11-Descriptive-Text-Assessment
IGCSE Edexcel Language B (QP) Y11-Descriptive-Text-Assessment
1. In lines 5-11, identify one point the writer makes about the glacier. [1 mark]
____ The glacier is described as hard, silvered, and pocked with fallen stones. Further
down, it becomes ruptured into crevasses and blocks, with glimpses of blue ice visible
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3. Explain how the writer presents his impressions of his ascent up the glacier.
You should support your answer with close reference to the passage, including brief
______ The writer shows how he felt climbing the glacier by using descriptive words and
details to explain the challenges and dangers of the journey. For example, he talks about
the glacier's shape and appearance, saying it's like a "convex surface" and "hard, silvered
and pitted like old metal," providing vivid imagery to illustrate its appearance.
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He also talks about how difficult the climb was because the rocks were " shattered
horizontally and mazed with cracks". Additionally, he talks about the sounds he heard
while climbing, like the "clanging and tinkling" of the climbing gear on the rocks. These
details help us understand how the writer felt as he climbed the glacier, showing us both
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4. In lines 53 to 58, the narrator describes the food at the neighbor’s parties.
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5. Name two things the narrator says about how expensive these parties must be.
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____"The narrator mentions that every Friday, five crates of oranges and lemons arrive,
but by Monday, these same fruits are gone, indicating a luxurious comsumption fresh
produce. The narrator describes the hiring of a group of caterers who bring down several
hundred feet of canvas and enough coloured lights, suggesting the extravagance of the
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6. Explain how the writer presents his impressions of the celebrations at the neighbor’s
house. You should support your answer with close reference to the passage, including
____The writer shows his feelings about the neighbour’s celebrations by using detailed
descriptions and sensory details to present a vivid picture. For example, he describes
people moving around like moths among the whispers, champagne, and stars, which
creates a sense of energy and excitement. He also talks about the food and drinks at the
parties, like "glistening hors-d’oeuvre" and "spiced baked hams", making it seem
luxurious and expensive. Additionally, he mentions the music playing and the burst of
chatter as a gypsy dancer performs, showing the lively atmosphere of the parties. Overall,
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7. Compare how the writers of Text One and Text Two convey their ideas and experiences
of the places described in texts. Support your answer with examples from both texts.
__ In Text 1, the writer describes the experience of climbing a mountain, focusing on the
physical challenges and dangers faced by the climbers. The writer uses descriptive
language to present a vivid picture of the landscape, such as describing the glacier as
having a "bulging surface" and being "hard, shiny, and pitted like old metal". Additionally,
sensory details are used to summon the atmosphere of the climb, such as the sound of
"clanking and tinkling" climbing hardware and the feeling of "wetter and colder" hands.
On the other hand, Text 2 describes the expensive parties hosted by the narrator's
neighbour, emphasizing the richness and luxury of the setting. The writer uses vivid
imagery to picture the scene, such as describing the neighbour's garden as being "bright
with primary colours " and filled with "floating rounds of cocktails". Additionally, sensory
details are used to summon the atmosphere of the parties, such as the sound of "chatter
and laughter" and the sight of "hair cut in strange new ways".
Overall, both writers effectively convey their ideas and experiences through descriptive
language and sensory details, but they focus on different aspects of the places described,
the physical challenges of climbing a mountain in Text 1 and the luxurious atmosphere of
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