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In recent years, using computers is are ( chủ ngữ số nhiều + động từ

số nhiều em nha) becoming increasingly popular. People hold different opinions
about it. In my opinion, everything in this universe has positive and negative sides,
depending on each person’s perspective. Some people think that this is a positive
trend. However, others think that it is leading to negative consequences. In the
following essay, both sides of the argument will be discussed in more detail.
On the one hand, some people say that this is a positive trend. First
and foremost, using computers is not only time-saving but also money-saving. In
fact, instead of spending hours going to specific places, nowadays people + can (e
thêm) study anywhere, right at home via the computers. It will help us reduce the
financial burden in life. Besides, people always want to discover and experience
new things, so I think that using computers will give people such things.
Additionally, using computers helps people handle study quickly and easily,
thereby minimizing errors and improving study efficiency. Lastly, using computers
will provide us with useful and necessary knowledge, thereby helping us have an
overview and synthesis of the problem and solve it easily. It can be seen that using
computers is are actually very beneficial in many ways.
- Em tham khảo thêm nhé:
+ when today’s modern life has a lot of pressure, using computer is a great
way to help us relieve stress after tiring hours of work or study because it
can make us feel relaxed and happy.

On the other hand, others argue that it is leading to negative

consequences. In the first place, using computers is the main culprit that makes
students distracted from studying because they spend too much time on it.
Furthermore, according to recent scientific research, people spending too much on
using computers can be harmful to people’s health because artificial light emitted
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from electronic devices can cause nearsightedness, insomnia, and even cancer. Last
but not least, using computers will negatively affect people’s soft skills because it
limits their ability to communicate face-to-face. It can be proved that using
computers also have quite a few limitations.
In conclusion, all of the things I mentioned above are just my own
opinions on this matter. I think that each person will have a different assessment of
the problem and it will affect each person differently, depending on the particular
case. As far as I am concerned, (e thêm dấu phẩy) using computers (e thêm) could
has have (e lưu ý could + have e nhé) both positive and negative impacts. People
should have further consideration on this issue.

In recent years, studying aboard is becoming increasingly popular.

People hold different opinions about it. In my opinion, everything in this universe
has positive and negative sides, depending on each person’s perspective. Some
people think that studying aboard is considered a life-transforming opportunity for
many students. However, others think that there are numerous challenges awaiting
them. In the following essay, both sides of the argument will be discussed in more
detail.
On the one hand, some people think that studying aboard is considered
a life-transforming opportunity for many students. First and foremost, studying
abroad is wonderful treasures from which it gives us them (ở đây e không đi du
học nên e ko dùng us (chúng ta) nhé, e sửa thành them (họ) nha, them sẽ đứng sau
động từ em nha) many choices in work, many opportunities to develop ourselves
themselves (e sửa để phù hợp với vế trước nhé), improve our their (our nghĩa là
của chúng ta, là tính từ sở hữu đứng trc danh từ, nhưng ở đây e không đi du học
nên e sẽ sửa thành their (của họ) nhé) skills, and expand knowledge as well as
improve quality of life. Besides, people always want to discover and experience
new things, so I think that studying abroad can give people such things.
Additionally, studying abroad can help people understand the personalities,
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lifestyles and cultures of other countries, religions, and peoples. Lastly, studying
abroad will provide us them with useful and necessary knowledge, thereby helping
us them have an overview and synthesis of every problem and solve it easily. It can
be seen that studying abroad is actually very beneficial in many ways.
On the other hand, others think that there are numerous challenges
awaiting them. In the first place, studying abroad can create a heavy financial
burden because initial investment costs are relatively high. Furthermore, studying
abroad creates invisible pressures, sometimes even crushing people’s resilience to
overcome difficulties. Last but not least, language barrier and culture shock are two
difficult factors for foreigners. It can be proved that studying abroad also has quite
a few limitations.
- Em tham khảo thêm nhé:
+ studying abroad can easily cause boredom for everyone, so it will be
difficult to concentrate, leading to low efficiency.
In conclusion, all of the things I mentioned above are just my own
opinions on this matter. I think that each person will have a different assessment of
the problem and it will affect each person differently, depending on the particular
case. As far as I am concerned, (e thêm dấu phẩy) studying abroad could has have
both positive and negative impacts. People should have further consideration on
this issue.