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REVISED DRAFT - Humans of Sao Paulo - Final Narrative
REVISED DRAFT - Humans of Sao Paulo - Final Narrative
✍️ Have you ever thought about how it is living far away from work? Roselma is a // year old woman with 2 kids
and lives with her husband and younger son. She was originally born in Maceio, Alagoas. Then she came to São
Paulo to work and started to work as a maid. Her life was very challenging. She didn't have much money
because she came from a very humble family.
When she came to são paulo her options weren't perfect as she had just arrived and nearby where she lived
there weren't many families looking for maids. She had a misfortuned time, finding a favorable job that paid off
all that she needed to survive. After a long time of looking, she finally found a job that suited her. It was an older
woman's house where she would work every Tuesday. During that time she was able to adapt and everything
started to fit into place. Then she found another job. where she worked every other day, but Tuesdays because
she would still work and the old lady's house.. her life was finally getting into place taking care of her deaf son,
and of her rest of the family.
After a time It was difficult for her having to take care of her deaf son and her family, and also having to worry
about work but finally she found a family that was willing to pay well, the location was a bit far away but she was
receiving enough to take care of family. Rent got more expensive and it got very tough for her to take care of
her family getting the small amount that she was earning. The place she was working was a lovely
condominium where the family of Marcelo Lima lived. Marcelo's family was looking for a new maid. They asked
the condominium security to recommend a maid for them, and Roselma was the first person they said.
Finally Marcelo‘s family and Roselma came to an agreement and paid enough for Roselma to pay her rent. She
could now take care of her son, have a good healthcare plan and even be able to buy some gifts for her family.
Nowadays she talks about how it is difficult to come to work as she has to get two buses, but now she lives
happily and is grateful for everything that has happened in her life.
Help Desk
Hook The Basics
When you share an event, experience or facts about your person, don't stop there!! As yourself, who cares? And then
elaborate by explaining why it matters.
-If… then…
-Create an analogy
-Use precise (specific) words to paint a clearer picture for the reader
-Use sensory language (show how something feels, tastes, smells, sounds, or looks
Closing
Self-Assessment
Directions: After completing and revising your narrative, determine whether you have hit
each learning target and write yes or no in the "target hit" column. For learning targets you
did not fully meet, explain how you can improve in the "area of growth" column.
TARGET HIT (YES OR NO) LEARNING TARGET AREA OF GROWTH
WRITING 8.8
Practice using a range of written narrative structures to tell real or imagined events.
0/3 = NY 1/3 = D 2/3 = P 3/3 = A