DRAFT 1

Day to day, when you walk on the Street; we can see different situation like; accidents,
fights, disccussions, among others. Rarely do we realize the life of animals and how
important is it, there are some animal shelter and I am basically in favor of that
because they thing the pain of the animals is hard and also living in the Street it can be
difficult to everyone not only for the humans. Imagine if you don´t a house, family or
someone can help you in the normal day, for that reason, Loving animals, I go with my
family to some fields where we can see a lot of animals without family, but we not only
go to a fields, Even my mother knows some district where there are a lot of animals
whitout a house or family.

But one day, I decided to rescue a dog in Puente Piedra, this dog was alone on the
Street. And before going home I carried on in my bag, But my family told me different
rules, My dad said “Totto” can be in home only if I go out with him in the morning and
night, even if I´m sleepy, My mom said the dogs are naughty and run wherever he
wants so I have to be careful and take him care the whole time. Thinking about it, I
decided to have it at home. Because there is a lot of danger in the Street.

Finally, that was a compassion sitution that I have to live nive years ago, because in
that moment I think a lot about my dog´s life, clearly, and now I´m proud of me
because My dog is the happiness of the house, and he knows, my Friends and the
whole family remember him, and also always ask me for him.

Dear Gabriel
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