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In this sample, the message is equivalent and concepts are conveyed effectively. Notes for improvement include
maintaining a “top-down” approach to grammar. Listing from the most general (scripture) to the most specific (the
Sermon on the Mount) will make the ASL grammar the most clear. Another suggestion relating to use of space was
shared. Rather than shifting from side to side to depict different people in the story, I could try using eye gaze to look up
and down. This is a more simple way to convey Jesus (an authority figure in this context) talking to the people by
interpreting the people’s comments as looking up at Him. Last, though production is clear, cohesion/coherence could be
improved by adding short pauses for utterance boundaries.