You have covered the topic in an appropriate way, and you have included all the main points of

the wring. The ideas are clearly stated, and you have used correct grammar, vocabulary and
linking words to connect the paragraphs.

Content 5 The content is accurate, and all the ideas are relevant.
Communicative 4,5 The style is appropriate and well communicated.
Achievement
Organization 5 The text is well organized and easy to follow.
Language 4,5 The language style is the one that should be used and
there are many complex words used, as well as great
range of verb tenses. Some repetitions could be
avoided.
19/20