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Unit 4 - Essay
Unit 4 - Essay
Unit 4 - Essay
Essay writing
Many educators contend that students have lately undergone difficult situations. However, instead
of doing something smart or useful to take the lead in their life, they prefer to spend hours and hours
using new gadgets, which make their lives easier but which do not actually help them face any
critical circumstance they are going through. In this essay, I will discuss two of the many benefits in
positive thinking as it can help students significantly in their everyday life.
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Paragraph 1
reducing stress – improving one’s well-being and focusing on solving problems
Topic sentence: reducing stress
Controlling idea: benefit (positive thinking)
Supporting sentences: …
Teens like adults, can experience stress every day and can benefit from learning stress management skills.
Most teens experience more stress when they deal with a situation as dangerous, difficult, or painful and
they don't have the resources to face it. However, How can they overcome and manage the stress?
On the one hand, they can distribute their school duties with fun activities for example: hanging out with
friends or doing some sports.
Moreover, they can also have a healthy diet and sleep well, these suggestions may help them to feel well
and organize their time in a better way.
Paragraph 2
improving productivity – pursuing goals in the short and the long run
Conclusion: recycle
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Conclusion
In your layout, for your second paragraph, you wanted to talk about students feeling “more confident at
doing whatever they undertake in life”. I suggested you used that idea for the conclusion.
Look at the sample conclusion to get ideas for your layout. See, how this writer recycles/paraphrases their
ideas to round off their contention.
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