first start with introduction than in 2nd paragraph write about environmental

implications

do not repeat sentence

write in small paragraphs

good example

good point mention key words like urban flooding

 well written points

diversify answer with more points and try to write in points with good flowcharts

according to The National Disaster Management Guidelines:

Management of Urban Flooding report, published by the National
Disaster Management Authority (NDMA) in 2010. 31 per cent of
the country was urbanised in 2011. Natural streams and
watercourses, formed over thousands of years due to the forces of
flowing water in the respective watersheds, have been altered
because of urbanization.

conclusion is good

Unplanned tourism activities: Using water bodies to attract tourists has become a threat to several urban lakes in India. Tso
Morari and Pongsho lakes in Ladakh have become polluted because of unplanned and unregulated tourism. Another
example is that of Ashtamudi Lake in Kerala’s Kollam city, which has become polluted due to spillage of oil from motor
boats.

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