The given bar chart illustrates the figure for passengers using public transport

in Somewhere town between 2012 and 2015.

Overall, it is clear that the volume of three kinds (OF) public transport
fluctuated significantly during the survey years. In addition, the number of
people using tram had followed an upward trend from 2012 to 2015.

In 2012, the volume of train (users/passengers) was the highest at 80 while the
opposite was true for tram at just 20. Moreover, in 2012, the number of people
using bus was nearly 55- more than double the rate of tram used people. In
2013, the figure for people using train reduced dramatically at TO 10, (WHILE)
the rate of bus used people also reduced slightly by 15. However, the
percentage of tram (USERS?) increased at TO 25.

In 2014,the number of train used increased slightly to around 35 while the bus
user went up significantly by 30.In addition, the fingure for tram used raised by
nearly 25.In the final survey year, the number of bus used decreased to
60.However, the volume of people who used train increased to 63 and the
fingure for tram user also went up and hit the peak at 95. (SELF-CHECK)
2/Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or
school, some people believe that this has negative development while others
think there are some benefits. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many people spending a number of times ARE USING MORE TIME
FOR travelling to work or school, AND some people think that it has negative
development while others say that it has some benefits. In this essay, I will
discuss both viewS and give my opinion./STATE MY POSITION. - PARAPHRASE

On the one hand, it is understandable why many people believe spending

more and more time travelling to work or school has some benefits. First of all,
people will have more time to prepare their work or study. While travelling if
they are not the diver ?? person, they are able to use THIS time for reviewing
their lesson, preparing their slide for presentation. Not only that, when having
more time, people may have time for some short conversationS (WITH
WHOM?), they can gain more knowledge about their work, their life,.. and go
SO on. Next FURTHERMORE/MOREOVER,having more time travelling meanS
they have more time to rest.People can relax before work so that they can be
more effective.For instance, when somone had to work overnight and in the
next day, they have to take a serious seminor.As a result, if they have more
time travelling, they can/have a chance to relax, chill and will not be awkward
and probably do well at the seminor. – seminar?

On the other hand,there are a number of reasons why people think that
spending more and more time travelling has many drawbacks.First,people can
become lazy when they have a lot of space spare? time.While going to school
or company, people have space time , it is common that they will over relax
and become lazy which affect to could badly AFFECT THEIR productivity.
Otherwise, … some companies are required that their employee work hard,
these employee gain more money and their eNviroment is very competitive so
if they spend more time travelling, these employee may not response
MEET/FULFILL their THE EMPLOYERS’ requires REQUIREMENT.

In conclusion,there are many drawbacks and benefit of having more time

travelling to work or school.Personally,I think people should balance their
travelling time and have more responsibility for their work and study.