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Leaving HomeGrade 7
Leaving HomeGrade 7
Leaving HomeGrade 7
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English Final Exam
Leaving Home
1. “Good-bye,” I whispered to my best friend, Dana. We hugged each other and
promised to always remember the times we shared in this once beautiful country. I
had been friends with Dana my entire life. She was my best friend. Dana could not
travel with me on my trip to America because her mom was too sick for the voyage
and her family didn't want to leave without her. In fact, I knew that we would never
see each other again once I left.
2. We lost my grandmother to starvation or famine. After her funeral, I was so sad I
cried for days, unable to understand how this could happen to my family. I didn't
want to leave Dana, but I knew my family would be safe when we arrived to
America. Health and peace were waiting for us there.
3. The day I found out we had to leave, I yelled and screamed. “This is disgusting;
famine has taken everything from me! I won’t go and leave my friends, and leave my
home!”
4. Mother sat beside me, rubbing my hair and wiping my tears. “It has been a terrible
time for us,” she started, “but if we make it to America, we will be safe.” I had heard
terrible stories about the ships that would take us to America. The conditions were
frightening. I was afraid but I knew we had to go.
5. “We will be fine,” she told me. I wondered if her words were to comfort me. As the
tears streamed down her face, I knew she was stressed and sad. In fact, the past few
years had been horrible. We had very little food. Many of our friends had died of
famine. However, it was not until we lost grandmother that my family decided to
leave. My mother worried that we would not survive here. We were all getting weak.
So, my father made the decision to travel to America. Looking at my mother, it was
clear she believed that if we did not leave, we would all die soon. I didn’t want to be
selfish and make the situation more difficult.
6. “You are right, mother, we have go to America. We will be safe there; we will build a
new life. I will make new friends, but I will always hold on to the memory of my
beloved grandmother and best friend Dana.”
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