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Proofreading Review Assignment
Proofreading Review Assignment
Proofreading Review Assignment
Final Review
DIRECTIONS: Read the student essay below. Use the proofreading marks on page 6 to
correct any errors you see.
My favorite place to go when I want to hang out is the shopping mall. It’s a great
I like the mall goodest because it is never dull. There was always something new to
look at there. It could be a new display window in one of the Department Stores, or
maybe a brand new store that has just opened. Perhaps it is a new line of summer
clothing or a new computer program. No matter when you go, things are always
There is usually something interesting to do. At the mall, too. One day, my mother
and I went to the bookstore to hear a famously author read some of his poetry.
Another time, us went to helped out with a charity fund-raiser that was held in the
food court. There are always video games and restaurants to enjoy. Sometimes, I just
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like taking a long walk at a place where I know it won’t rain on me!
I probably enjoy the mall so much because, outside of school, it is the place where I
see my friends most often, within ten minutes of arriving at the mall, I usually. Hear
someone yell, “hey There!” and, when I turn, I see one of my best friends running
toward me. My mother says, “Meet me back here in an hour,” and then off I goes with