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1. 3.5
2. 4.0
3. 3.75 ECN 467
4. 3.75
5. 3.75
6. 4.0 Dear Garima Lohiya,
7. 4.25 Overall your performance is good and for further
8. 4.25 improvement you need to go through the following
feedbacks.
9. 4.5
10. 4.0 Strength
11. 6.25 #1. Handwriting is neat and legible. Language is satisfactory.
#2. Content is satisfactory.
12. 5.75 #3.You tried to address each part of the question.
13. 5.75
Need for improvement-
14. 5.75 #1. Introduction can be improvised like answers 2,6,8 and
15. 6.0 12.Start with central theme of the question.
16. Na #2. More contextual points can be written like answer
1,3,5,6,12,15 and 20.
17. Na #3. Try to give more emphasis on main or direct demand of
18. Na the
19. 6.25 question like 4,13 and 14..Other answers also.
#4. better. Conclusion can be written in answers like 2,3 and
20. 6.0 6.
Total marks#5. It is recommended to use flowcharts in the answer.
#6. It is advised to emphasize on the structure and
obtained:- presentation of the answer.
81.5 #7. Try to diversify your points wherever possible.
#8. For content improvement you can refer standard books,
NCERT and forumias.
#9. You have potential. Continuously worked hard to get
good marks.
#10. Try to attempt all the questions.
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Appropriate
introduction.

Relevant
point.

You are advised to

mention here
failure of Cripps
Mission lead to the
Quite India
movement.
.feudal land
settlement system
led to rise of kishan
sabha movement
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Good point.

It is better to
discuss here
Swadeshi
movement led
Britishers to bring
Morley Minto
reforms 1909
.forming of INC.. led
to Bring
Indian council act
1882.

3.5
Relevant conclusion.
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It is better to start
your answer by
explaining the key
words Nationalism
and Communalism.

Points are
satisfactory.

Contextual
points.
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All points are well

presented.

4.0
Conclude with the impact of this
parallel development.
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Begin your answer

by explaining what
was the
contribution of the
women Freedom
Fighter to the
Freedom Struggle.

Relevant point.

Mention the
contribution of the
Individual Woman
Freedom Fighter in
freedom Struggle.

Contextual
points.
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Points are
satisfactory.

Good point.

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Conclude by expressing gratitude

to unrecognized contributions.
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Mention here
when it was
formed.

Well it is
appreciable.

Discuss here invasion

Try to address adequately.of Afghanistan and
crash of global oil
prices.
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All points are

well presented.

Try to conclude.

3.75
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It is better to
write short
introduction
not more
than 3-4 lines
in 10 marks
question.

Points are relevant

however you can
mention here about
political and social
transformation
Like
Led to growth of
socialism
,communism and
human and labour
right
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Relevant
points.

Points are
contextual.

Try to conclude 3.75

appropriately.
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It is better to
start your
answer by
describing the
NEW DEAL.

All points are relevant

and contextual.
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You are advised to

list the measures that
worked, followed by
ones that did not
Like
It did not help
Small farmers
Employment was
only partially address

Conclude with summary and

describing the critical role of WW-2
in pulling USA out of depression.

4.0
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Satisfactory
introduction.

All points are

well
organized.

Contextual
points.
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All points
are well
presented.

Points are
relevant.

4.25
Relevant conclusion.
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start by
defining the
concept of
gender gap.

Points are
relevant.

You are
advised to use
examples to
support your
arguments.

Satisfactory
point
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Contextual
points.

Try to box or
underline the
main
headings.

Relevant points
however try to
define properly.

Relevant conclusion. 4.25

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Satisfactory
introduction.

All points are

well organized.

Points are
relevant.
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Good point.

Satisfactory
point.

Appreciable
points.

Satisfactory conclusion.
4.5
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Try to introduce by
highlighting the
contrast between
lack of resources
and opportunities.

Relevant
cycle.

Contextual
points.
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All points are well

organized with
flowchart.

Relevant points.

Writing short
paragraphs are
advisable.
4.0

Try to conclude
appropriately.
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Start your answer

by briefly
differentiating
between both the
viceroys.

You have
defined all the
policies well, it
is good. Keep
it up.
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Points are
relevant.

Good point.
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All points are

satisfactory.

Satisfactory
conclusion. 6.25
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Introduce your
answer by
explaining what
was the
importance of
Mahatma Gandhi
and Jawaharlal
Nehru in Freedom
Struggle.

Relevant point
however you can
use box compare
both
simultaneously .

Contextual point.
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You are advised
to write some
more contextual
points.

Relevant
however try to
write concisely.

Good point.
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Points are
relevant.

Discuss certain similarities

between the two. 5.75
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Introduce with
explaining
safety valve
theory.

Satisfactory
point.

Try to explain with

some examples
how Britishers
used Congress as
safety valve for
suppressing
uprising, revolts
etc

Points are relevant.

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Points are
relevant.

Maintain a flow,
writing randomly is
not advisable.
Discuss arguments
both in favour and
against the theory
that Indian national
Congress was
created as safety
valve.
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You can explain
how Congress
used Britishers for
gradual reforms
like Indian council

Mention here
Dufferin's anti
Congress stance
and William
wedderburn's
Biography.

Relevant conclusion. 5.75

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Relevant
introduction.

Points are well

presented.

Reasons for
appeasement
.To avoid wars in
future
.public opinion had
development against
war
.to keep Germany as a
buffer and remain
You gave less away from the
emphasis on this communist Russia
section. .sympathy of right
Wingers for Germany.
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Points are
contextual.
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Satisfactory point.

Conclude on the basis of above

points.

5.75
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Appropriate
introduction.

Satisfactory
point.
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Contextual point.

Points are relevant.

All points are

well presented.
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Points are
contextual.

Try to add some

more contextual
points
Made people as
source of power
And not monach as
divine source.
Meritocracy..

6.0
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Satisfactory
introduction.

It is advisable to
describe what is the
nature of
urbanization in
India.

List some way in

Satisfactory point. which urbanization
act as a solution to
development
issues.

Good point.
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Points are
satisfactory.
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All points
are relevant
and
contextual.

6.25
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Relevant
introduction.

All points are

well
presented.
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You can add

some more
points like
Child
marriage,child
trafficking,
Increased social
media usage,
Lockdown and
social media
vulnerabilities.

Satisfactory
points.
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Points are well

organized with
flowchart.

Relevant
points.

6.0
Relevant conclusion.