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Q4 8 Shs Readingandwriting Textualevidence v1
Q4 8 Shs Readingandwriting Textualevidence v1
Q4 8 Shs Readingandwriting Textualevidence v1
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Reading and Writing – Senior High School
Module 4 – Lesson 1: The Skeptical Reader
First Edition, 2020
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MODULE 4 – LESSON 1
So, shall
we start? Let’s
give it a nice
try.
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Identify the evidence/s in the following paragraphs. Use your answer
sheet for this.
1. Volcanic activity occurs around the Pacific Ring of Fire because many
destructive plate boundaries are located here. One example is the destructive
boundary between the continental South American plate and the oceanic Pacific plate
which has formed the Andes Mountains. The denser oceanic plate is subducted
underneath the continental plate and melts as it falls into the hot mantle. Magma rises
up through the continental plate and is erupted through volcanoes at the surface. The
destructive boundaries all around the Pacific Ring of Fire are the reason for high
volcanic activity.
2. First of all, removing wild animals from their natural habitats is incredibly cruel.
When kept captive, these beautiful creatures become bored and lonely, often leading
to a condition called ‘zoochosis’. Animals suffering from zoochosis begin performing
anxious, repetitive acts such as rocking back and forth, swaying, grooming,
themselves excessively vomiting. Conditions such as this clearly demonstrate that wild
animals belong in the wilderness; not in restrictive, prison-like enclosures. Animals
must be freed from zoos now, so that this terrible suffering and mental torture ends for
good.
3. Thinking and learning are the things that happen inside people’s brains.
Because teachers can’t look inside students’ brains to see what they learned, it is
important for students to make their thinking visible to the outside world. A great way
to do this is to create a digital portfolio. A digital portfolio is a website that students
build in order to document their learning. To those new to documenting learning, it
might be easy to confuse documentation with merely recording what the class has
done. Some people think a digital portfolio is just an archive of activities. However, to
be useful to both teachers and students, a digital portfolio must extend beyond this.
The process of learning should be the forms of documenting learning with digital
portfolios. Documenting learning with digital portfolios works best when students
document the events, questions, conversations, and actions that provoke and advance
learning over time.
4. Although some teachers resist the idea of using Facebook in the classroom,
incorporating such social media can benefit student learning. For example, education
researchers Rodrigues Sabino and Zhou claim that using social networking media in
online classrooms allows students to play a more active role in their learning rather
than a passive role as absorbers of information (1152). It seems possible that if
research continues to support its use, more teachers will soon be encouraging their
students to Tweet and Facebook in the classroom.
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5. One factor within the team that seems to be important is the notion of team
cohesiveness. Team cohesiveness enables a diverse group of individuals to work
towards common goals. Addison (1996,p. 107) argues that highly cohesive teams ‘are
more effective at achieving goals that they set for themselves, and have higher
member satisfaction’. For example, cohesive teams are more likely to have high
morale (Smith 1996) and the ability to cooperate, and to work effectively together
(McAffe & Champagne 1987). Therefore, team cohesiveness enhances team
effectiveness.
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The Four Types of Evidence
1. Statistical Evidence – The strongest type of evidence in formal writing is statistical
evidence. This ranges from true, hard data presented as a percentage or number, to
survey-type data.
Statistical evidence can be proven as fact. You can actually go out and find
hard information to prove your particular claim.
An EU leader, Federica Mogherini, has gone as far as to say, “We are rich.
We are in peace. We have the duty to save and protect people that are fleeing from
war” (qtd. In Pearson 42)
3. Anecdotal Evidence - Storytelling, although based on fact, can include quite a bit
of opinion, thus making it less objective. Usually, eyewitnesses are used as
providers of anecdotal evidence. They saw or experienced the phenomenon at hand
are telling their version or side of the story.
“I know black swans exist because I saw one flying away today.”
4. Analogical Evidence – Analogies are mainly useful when dealing with a topic that
is under-researched. If you are on the cutting edge of an issue, you’re the person
breaking new ground. When you don’t have statistics to refer to or other authorities
on the matter to quote, you have to get your evidence from somewhere. Analogical
evidence steps in to save the day.
While no one can predict the future impacts of the mass migration into the
EU, studies of the past can shed light on the matter at hand. A study conducted in
Denmark during the 1990’s showed that an influx of refugees actually pushed
native workers into more skilled jobs and increased their standards of living (NY
Times 3).
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Determining Textual Evidence
To better evaluate the author’s argument, one should be able to determine the
evidence from the text. This will allow him/her to validate the assertions of the author
and his/her own counterclaims as a response to reading. Evidence is defined as the
details given by the text author to support his/her claim. The evidence provided by the
writer substantiates the text. It reveals and builds on the position of the writer and
makes the reading more interesting. Evidence is crucial in swaying the reader to the
author’s side. A jury or judge, for example, relies on evidence presented by a lawyer
before it makes a decision regarding a case.
Evidence can include the following;
• Unified;
• Relevant to the central point
• Specific and concrete;
• Accurate; and
• Representative or typical
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Read the given news article below. Then, perform the tasks after. Use
your sheet for this.
Dr. Martin Parreῆo, National Program Officer of the World Food Programme-
Philippines, called on Filipinos to pay more attention to child malnutrition at all times –
with or without disasters.
Latest statistics from the National Nutrition Council (NNC) showed that 67% of
Filipino families are not eating enough even when there are no calamities.
In the Philippines, malnutrition is seen across all age groups – from infancy to
adulthood, the 2013 National Nutrition Survey revealed.
Source: https://www.slideshare.net/VanessaRamones/formulating-assertions
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Practice Task 1
Identify and write down the assertion made in the test. Do this on as separate
sheet of paper.
______________________________________________________________
Practice Task 2
List down two evidences or statements from the text which support the claim
and identify each. Write these down on a sheet of paper.
1.____________________________________________________________
2.____________________________________________________________
Practice Task 3
Give an example for each type of evidence. Use your answer sheet for this.
1. Statistical Evidence
___________________________________________________________
2. Analogical Evidence
___________________________________________________________
3. Anecdotal Evidence
___________________________________________________________
4. Testimonial Evidence
___________________________________________________________
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Identify what type of evidence is used in the following statement. Write your
answers on a separate sheet of paper.
__________1. In 2015 alone, an estimated 350,000 migrants have crossed the
borders of the European Union.
__________2. Famous and accomplished writer Stephen King advices young writer
that, “If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot
and write a lot. There’s no way around these two things that I’m aware of, no shortcut.”
__________3. Mr. Bonica’s class is an example of how 8:05 am start time has
impacted late arriving students to Tualatin High School, as he has seen a sharp decline
in tardy students. This year alone, his rate of tardy students has dropped from 12 %
to 8%.
__________4. More kids than ever are becoming educated, especially girls. In the
1980’sonly half of girls in developing countries completed elementary school; now, 80
percent do (Kristof 2).
__________5. Actually, cars exemplify the public health approach we need to apply
to guns. We don’t ban cars, but we do driver’s licenses, seatbelts, airbags, padded
dashboards, safety glass and collapsible steering columns. And we’ve reduced the
auto fatality rate by 95 percent (NY Times, 8).
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Read the article. Then, identify the author’s assertion as well as the evidences
that support his claim.
During the 21st century, the word Facebook (FB) came into awareness. In
fact, it is one of the most popular social networking sites with over one million
users. Almost ¾ of these users are between 13-25 years old, and these people
use FB every time they have an opportunity to do so at school, at home, in the
mall, and anywhere else. So, FB seems to just be a waste of time. It is a complete
distraction to students. Many students fail to complete their assignments and
projects because they are addicted to FB. Some use words and acronyms that
only they can understand, and it crosses over even during face-to-face
conversations. FB also becomes a tool for bashing and venue for gossiping.
These are just some of my expressions of FB.
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Answer Key
Learning Challenges
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3. A digital portfolio is
a website that students
build in order to
document learning. To
those documenting
learning, it might be
easy to confuse
documentation with
merely recording what
the class has done.
4. For example,
education researchers
Rodrigues Sabino and
Zhou claim that using
social networking
media in online
classrooms allows
students to play a
more active role in
their learning rather
than a passive role as
absorbers of
information (1152).
5. Addison (1996,p.
107) argues that highly
cohesive teams ‘are
more effective at
achieving goals that
they set for
themselves, and have
higher member
satisfaction’.
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References
Books
Barrot, Jessie. Academic Reading & Writing For Senior High School,
(C&E Publishing Inc., 2016), 98
Tiongson, Marella Therese & Rodriguez, Maxine Rafella. Reading and
Writing Skills (Rex Book Store, Inc., 2016), 25-26
Websites
https://owlcation.com/humanities/The-Four-Types-of-Evidence
http://tualatinworldhistory.weebly.com/uploads/5/7/2/8/5728202/types_of
_evidence_handout_v.2.pdf
https://www2.palomar.edu/users/bthompson/Anecdotal%20Evidence.ht
ml
https://www.google.com/search?q=example+of+paragraph+with+eviden
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