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Fys II Final Paper - The Big Picture
Fys II Final Paper - The Big Picture
Chloe Andry
A Faith-Filled Community
Throughout this semester in Faith, Doubt, and Reason, we have dived into concepts
revolving around community. With readings, films, discussions, and “community-based” group
projects I have found myself constantly challenged to think deeper into how communities
function and the numerous factors that affect communities everywhere. I am aware that I have so
much more to learn throughout my life on this topic however, I feel I have already absorbed so
much and sparked a lifelong interest in what community truly means, the importance of justice in
community, warnings of dystopias, ideal communities, and the possibility of achieving them.
As simple as it sounds, one of the main lessons I learned about community is that is
sharing ideas, listening actively, negotiating and compromising, and constantly creating new
ideas to accommodate the progress and the pitfalls. There are countless decisions and efforts
made by each individual that all contribute to the cohesiveness and success of a flourishing
community.
Throughout the process of creating our ideal community of Breezeway, I had a really
hard time making those tough decisions that governments in real life must make to satisfy
everyone – and my decisions were make-believe! So much goes into creating systems that sit
right in the sweet spot of providing order and protection and also making people happy. Whether
the people in Breezeway were happy or not with our decisions, we will never know…My group
also, fortunately, got to decide our origin story. In reality, communities do not have a say in what
their past was. They must move forward with whatever baggage they might be carrying and try
to resolve it as best as possible. It is important they do not erase the past, but rather learn from it
together and collaborating for the well-being of everyone. For example, each of us in the group
took on a role, performed our tasks, and discussed for hours on end what decisions were best, to
create a system for the greater good. Of course, some improvements could be made to our
community, but the overall lesson learned is that communities are complicated and so very
else’s decisions, but that is exactly what community is; it has the potential to be both beautiful
Freud and Plato helped me to think critically about the origin of community with their
iconic philosophies. It stems from the struggle to survive on Earth alone. There are numerous
factors like weather, natural disasters, basic human needs like food and water, predators,
sickness, aging, and mental illnesses that are difficult to navigate by oneself. When multiple
people can divide up the work, a strong sense of reliance and collaboration is developed. People
begin to acquire specialized gifts and knowledge and contribute to the collective well-being of
the group. When brainstorming his ideal community in Plato’s Republic, he says, “...because
people need many things, and because one person calls on a second out of one need and on a
third out of a different need, many people gather in a single place to live together as partners and
helpers. And such a settlement is called a city. Isn’t that so?” (Plato 44). A strong sense of
interdependency kick-starts communities. Occupations in various fields then form and lead to
trade, infrastructure, transportation, marketplaces, currency, and merchants, just to name a few.
At this point in a community, the need for survival is met, and they can focus on areas that lead
to more pleasure, or what someone might describe as “fully living.” Freud stated in Civilizations
and Its Discontents that “a further incentive to a disengagement of the ego from the general mass
of sensations – that is, to the recognition of an ‘outside,’ an external world – is provided by the
frequent, manifold and unavoidable sensations of pain and unpleasure the removal and avoidance
of which is enjoined by the pleasure principle…” (Freud 14). People are wired to seek pleasure.
This is where the arts, entertainment, time off, spirituality, sports and games, and luxuries come
into play. A work and life balance that satisfies the need for pleasure can be sought out and
Freud explained that all of the gains from a community like support, meaningful work,
purpose, meaning, and beauty – the altruistic, “other” focused aspects – are shadowed with
losses. There are sacrifices we make to make the positives possible; to counter the unfortunately
aggressive side of all of us that produces conflict. We must sacrifice privacy, freedoms, and
individuality for the greater good and protection of the community. We also create religion,
pressure valves, laws, punishment, ethics, and social norms to better control and counter
aggression. This is the paradox. Human nature has both a positive and negative side. Within
relationships, there is love and also tension. In a community, there is a common good and a
looming struggle to overcome and control evil. The more people, the more magnified the
struggle (Freud 70-74). The push and pull will never fully be resolved, so a community must do
its absolute best to balance this struggle with the pursuit of justice.
Justice, to me, looks a lot like the golden rule of treating others the way you would like to
be treated. Due to my faith, I believe that everyone was created in God’s image and created with
an equal, unfathomable love from God. In the Ten Commandments, this vertical and horizontal
love is explained. Freud might disagree, but I believe that when we accept God’s love for us and
love God wholeheartedly, we are expected to love others just the same (Exodus 20). Of course,
we are not capable of the perfect love God gives us, but we must aim to support others as best as
we can. Overall, everyone’s life is extremely valuable. When the justice of loving, respecting,
and caring for everyone with as much intent and value as you hope others would for you is gone,
we experience injustice. In Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.’s A Letter from Birmingham Jail, he says,
“Injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere” (King 1). King recognized that one seed of
injustice, one seed of disrespect, grows exponentially into a beast of hatred and injustice.
everyone is tied to one another. If one is hurt by another, there is no doubt that the hurt is being
How does one stop this destruction of justice? Throughout this semester I learned about
people like Martin Luther King Jr. and prophets in Micah and Amos who called out the injustice
and brought awareness to people in the community during their time, in today’s time, and
beyond. These leaders were incredibly honest. With this honesty comes tension, but it is a
tension that is healthy and much needed. It comes from a place of love and hopefulness. Martin
Luther King Jr. describes “positive peace” as the calling out of wrongdoings and injustice and
working to make it better (King 6). If we do not practice “positive peace,” we remain stagnant as
an unjust community. We cannot move forward without uplifting one another, dignifying one
another, and calling each other higher. It is so important that each individual does their part in
learning about what justice truly means. It is not “payback” or “vengeance,” which is a common
misconception. “Positive peace” also entails self-reflection as well as calling out those in one’s
life who are not treating others with the respect they deserve. In the case of Martin Luther King
Jr., the prophets, and even more leaders throughout history, it might look like a public
declaration that will make a more universal impact. Whatever the scale might be and no matter
how uncomfortable, the fight for justice is a tension in community that should never fade or
become complacent.
When the fight for justice is silenced and power is corrupt, communities can begin to take
a dystopian form, similar to the societies in Nineteen Eighty-Four and The Handmaid’s
Tale. Reading these novels for one, reinforced my gratitude for the beauty and hope in my life
right now, but also opened my eyes to the possibilities of communities in our world today
becoming destructive in similar senses. When communities want so badly for their people to be
controlled and silent with no objections to the justice system and no voice, dystopias form.
In Nineteen Eighty-Four, O’Brien reveals the intent of the government in Oceania: “Now I will
tell you the answer to my question. It is this. The Party seeks power entirely for its own sake. We
are not interested in the good of others; we are interested solely in power, pure power” (Orwell
263). Everything the government did in Oceania was for their own good. The Party was
completely against the concept of justice and love in general. They took away all freedoms. They
prohibited any individuality or self-expression. They also kept the people from being informed of
the past. In the end, the people had nothing left. No one felt joy, hope, or connection, and even if
they wanted to, they could not advocate or fight for it. It can be seen that a community with no
Our world can avoid dystopias by first, educating people on what true justice is. We then
can advocate for the healthy use of protest and honesty. Dystopian novels are very impactful
educational tools that demonstrate what the void of justice leads to and warn communities that
might be on a destructive path to reevaluate their motives. Like the seed of injustice I had
mentioned before, the same is true with justice. If one act of reconciliation and change is made
even within one relationship, that mending can be seen in a whole community, and a magnitude
of justice can be achieved over time. Dystopias can be avoided if this type of mindset is adopted
If I were to pick three key factors that would make a community “ideal,” I would choose
freedom and education of faith, doubt, and reason, a government that allows freedom of speech,
expression, and protest, and an encouraged balance between work and life. My first pick would
be education on faith, doubt, and reason because I have seen how I have changed as a person
from this course. I came into this class with personal faith and left not only with a stronger sense
of my purpose but an awareness of the extreme impact that faith has not only for individuals but
for communities. I have learned that having an “ultimate concern” truly brings hope that no
worldly endeavor can provide. I learned that it is okay to doubt and question aspects of my faith
to strengthen it, and I have learned the means of reasoning with both. I oftentimes in class
thought about the extreme impact that this class would make if more people could take it. As I
had said, I have faith and I grew exponentially. What would happen if those without faith could
learn about the joy they could have if they put their hope into something eternal? I know that
what would happen would be a centered, open, and faith-based community, whatever each
My second factor would be freedom of speech, expression, and protest. I believe that if
people feel heard and that their opinions have value, they will express themselves with respect
and calmness. This way, art, literature, music, and more can be created and enjoyed, and protests
can be used to better the community as well. Injustices can be recognized and dealt with
maturely.
The last key factor is a work and life balance. In our world today, I oftentimes feel that
there is a wide spectrum of people who either play all day and do nothing to help better their
community or work all day and feel no sense of pleasure and relaxation. I would strive to make
pressure valves accessible to everyone. I would limit working hours but also try to help provide
jobs for people who need an income. I think finding, or at least seeking this balance between
providing for oneself and possibly a family and enjoying life’s beautiful moments is so crucial to
Despite my temptation to be pessimistic, I would say with a hopeful heart that achieving
the ideal community is possible. I think that if we were all without hope in the possibility of our
community getting better, our communities would plummet. So, I am hopeful that with all of the
tools, texts, and examples we have access to, we would learn that although it is sure to come with
its struggles and brokenness, the ideal community is attainable. It might not be perfect, because
people are without a doubt imperfect, but it can be worked towards. In Luke 6, The Sermon on
The Plain, and Matthew 5-7, The Sermon on the Mount, my key takeaway was “Do not judge.”
These three short words encapsulate a magnitude of lessons I think we all can apply to ourselves,
no matter one’s faith. If one can humble themselves, love others well, and help others around
them, great change can be made. It is important to note, that everyone’s “ideal” varies. However,
I think everyone can agree that as long as there is a higher meaning, promised freedoms, and the
means to survive and truly live, they are living in an idealistic community. With that being said, I
think that an ideal and beautifully imperfect community can exist. It is possible if we take all of
these hard truths Jesus preached and apply them wholeheartedly to our lives.
This semester has been a rollercoaster of learning but has helped shaped the way I think
about how my actions make a huge impact on those within my community. I have been able to
connect the dots between my personal journey of faith, doubt, and reason that we explored in the
first semester and see the impact it can make on a community of people on their own journeys as
well. The dynamics of community and all of the interrelated concepts are so hard to wrap my
head around fully, but I know that the knowledge I have acquired will make a huge difference,