Essay structure

1. Mở bài:

€ Cách 1: Some people think that playing video games is beneficial to their users while
others say that video games are more disadvantageous (Giới thiệu chủ đề). I will discuss both
sides of this argument in my essay below and give my personal view in the conclusion (Đưa
ra định hướng bài viết).

Some people believe that to spend money on roads and motorways than on public
transport systems., but there are also opinions that it is a waste. Personally, I believe
that investing on roads and motorways will bring benefits vehicles move and goods
faster.

Some people believe that the government should invest more money in science
education than other subjects to develop the country, but there are also opinions that it
is a waste. Personally, I believe that investing in science education will bring many
advantages to development and enjoy many benefits from it.

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2. CÁCH PHÁT TRIỂN THÂN BÀI

Một đoạn thân bài tốt thường phải thỏa mãn những yếu tố sau: ⎫ Có một ý chủ đạo ⎫ Ý chủ
đạo được triển khai bằng những lời giải thích và ví dụ cụ thể. Ví dụ:

Topic:
Some people think that video games are advantageous while others believe video games are
harmful to the people who play them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Đoạn 1:

On the one hand, playing video games has some advantages (Topic sentence). Firstly, games
help their players relax and therefore improve their work efficiency afterwards (Sub-idea 1).
This is extremely important for both working people and students who have to deal with
increasing workload nowadays (Supporting sentence). Secondly, playing games also has
some educational purposes (Sub-idea 2). For example, many modern games are designed
with English instructions, and players around the world can play together and communicate
in English. This motivates players to learn English in order to play the games well
(Supporting sentences).

Lưu ý: Không cần thiết phải viết câu kết đoạn.

Đoạn 2:

On the other hand, playing video games frequently causes several problems for players
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sentence). ....................................................................................................................................
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Đoạn mẫu:

On the other hand, playing video games frequently causes several problems for players
(Topic sentence). To begin with, such an activity is really addictive and sometimes takes
away too much time, which will make it extremely difficult for people to get out and do
exercise (Sub-idea 1). Consequently, these people are likely to suffer from a lot of diseases,
such as back pain or maybe obesity, due to this lack of physical exercise (Supporting
sentence). The second disadvantage of playing games is that it can distract players,
especially young students, from their study or work (Sub-idea 2). For instance, my younger
brother used to spend hours playing games everyday, and now his scores at school are really
low (Supporting sentence).

3. CÁCH VIẾT KẾT BÀI

Khẳng định lại quan điểm, và có thể tóm tắt các ý chính trong bài TRONG 1-2 CÂU.

Ví dụ: Topic:

Kết bài:

● € In conclusion, playing video games is both advantageous and

disadvantageous in many aspects. And in my view, the extent to which each user of
video games is affected is different and more or less depends on how much time he or
she spends on those games.
 ● € In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of video games are more
significant than the advantages.
● Chú ý: Không đề cập đến những gì đề bài không yêu cầu.

Some people think that video games are advantageous, while others believe video games
are harmful to

the people who play them.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

BÀI VIẾT HOÀN CHỈNH

Some people think that playing video games is beneficial to their users while others say that
video games are more disadvantageous (Giới thiệu chủ đề). I will discuss both sides of this
argument in my essay below and give my personal view in the conclusion (Đưa ra định
hướng bài viết).

On the one hand, playing video games has some advantages (Topic sentence). Firstly, games
help their players relax and therefore improve their work efficiency afterwards (Sub-idea 1).
This is extremely important for both working people and students who have to deal with
increasing workload nowadays (Supporting sentence). Secondly, playing games also has
some educational purposes (Sub-idea 2). For example, many modern games are designed
with English instructions, and players around the world can play together and communicate
in English. This motivates players to learn English in order to play the games well.
(Supporting sentences)

On the other hand, playing video games frequently causes several problems for players
(Topic sentence). To begin with, such an activity is really addictive and sometimes takes
away too much time, which will make it extremely difficult for people to get out and do
exercise (Sub-idea 1). Consequently, these people are likely to suffer from a lot of diseases,
such as back pain or maybe obesity, due to this lack of physical exercise (Supporting
sentence). The second disadvantage of playing games is that it can distract players,
especially young students, from their study or work (Sub-idea 2). For instance, my younger
brother used to spend hours playing games everyday, and now his scores at school are really
low (Supporting sentence).

In conclusion, playing video games is both advantageous and disadvantageous in many

aspects. And in my view, the extent to which each user of video games is affected is different
and more or less depends on how much time he or she spends on those games. (Đưa ra quan
điểm)

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