OUTLINE

INTRODUCTION

- Hook: In 2175 people have access to holographic displays, teleportation devices, and
artificial intelligence that can perform complex tasks.
- Build up: Immunity to most diseases is now achievable through genetic engineering,
homes are now designed to be modular and adaptable to individual needs, 3D printing
technology has enabled the construction of entire buildings in a matter of days and
currently, the traditional classroom model has been replaced by virtual reality-based.
- Thesis statement: My life as an immortal has been like a constant navigation through
uncharted waters, with moments of exploration and discovery with the ever-present risk
of treacherous storms.

Body Paragraph 1 – Positive Aspects

- Topic sentence: Thanks to my immortality I have had a lot of unforgettable and wonderful
moments.

- Characteristics #1: I have studied more languages.

- Details and examples: It have allowed me to communicate with people around the world,
creating a wide network of friends.

- Characteristics #2: I have pursued multiple careers

- Details and examples: I have mastering various skills to contribute to the society in different
ways.

- Concluding sentence: Because of that, I have been able to travel and developed meaningful
relationships with people from many cultures and backgrounds.

Body Paragraph 2 – Negative Aspects

- Topic sentence: Being immortal has made me feel trapped in an endless cycle of loss and
heartbreak.

- Characteristics #1: Constant loss of loved ones.

- Details and examples: It have made me feel disconnected and isolated, unable to form
meaningful relationships or maintain a stable life.

- Characteristics #2: Lack of purpose.

- Details and examples: It make me feel the absence of a final destination that has made me
feel irrelevant

- Concluding sentence: I have felt lonely because my friends and family grow old and die and
that’s why the accumulation of painful and traumatic memories has become burden for me.

CONCLUSION

- Restate your thesis statement: Being immortal has made my life a never-ending
voyage across unexplored waters, filled with exciting times of exploration and discovery
but also the constant threat of dangerous storms.
- Make predictions or compare your past: There exists the opportunity for resilience
from our past to emerge as our greatest weapon and it is through our struggles that we
find strength, resilience, and growth.