School Dropouts: Problem and Solution

Introduction
Background information
Thesis statement
Students are likely to drop out of school due to being bullied as well as having problems at home.
However, the problem can be remedied by talking to someone that they trust and seeking professional
advice.

Body

Main idea 1:
Topic sentence 1
The first reason for school dropouts is bullying by peers in school.

Supporting details
1. -happens to both male and female students. - boys-pushed around, beaten up, spat on etc. - girls-
slapped, called names, insulted etc.
2. Affects victims’ behaviour and academic achievements - feel afraid, anxious to attend school - start
avoiding classes.

Main idea 2:
Topic sentence
To solve this matter, the students need to talk to someone they trust.

Supporting details
1. -try talking to other students, teachers or parents.
2. -hopefully bullies will be identified - actions can be taken - reduce fear in the victims - encourage to
attend school regularly.

Main idea 3:
Topic sentence 3
Another possible reason why students drop out of school is that they have problems at home, specifically with
their parents.

Supporting details
1. - parents arguing and fighting with each other – create an imbalanced environment - lack of attention
from parents
2. - children feel lonely - lose motivation to study – start skipping school.

Main idea 4:
Topic sentence 4
However, seeking professional advice will be the best to resolve this issue.

Supporting details
1. -consult school counsellor - for advice
2. -may lift some of the burdens - they have someone to refer to

Conclusion