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Essay 3 - Final Draft 1
Essay 3 - Final Draft 1
Essay 3 - Final Draft 1
Nora Gonzalez
Julie Baker
English 1301
14 April 2024
In Benefit academic outcomes: Insights from Montessori education, Ronald B. Gillam has
elementary students. Stating there’s a difference in education between traditional school children
and children in Montessori institutions. Assessment and aspects used helped in evaluating
performance. Executive functions (EFs) play a role in the students academic success and
performance. The measures that this intuition has are different from standard center schools
which showcase better scores and skills. The author uses three major rhetorical choices which
include logos, ethos, and evidence to persuade the audience that Montessori education is better.
He uses logos to showcase logic, ethos to have a sense of trust, and evidence to support their
The author uses logos to demonstrate that through Montessori education students perform
better than traditional schools. Mentioning the use of the test those students took and the scores.
For example, the children’s development was evaluated using four different aspects. They
include executive functions, academic outcomes, well-being at school, and creativity. Executive
functions (EFs) used two different tasks known as selective attention and cognitive flexibility.
Used the Flanker fish task with arrows to study the selective attention of the children. Working
memory update was also tested and children were asked to listen and memorize letters and repeat
in ascending order. Academic outcomes were also needed to evaluate oral comprehension, early
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reading competence, and verbal problems. Older children tested their language and mathematical
skills. This showed excellent performance since the max score was one hundred percent. While
for Creativity, it was measured with divergent and convergent creativity. All performance was
tested as percentages. The results showed that in kindergarten and elementary age, the children
scored higher than traditional schools on all tasks. Gillam also mentioned the concerns of EFs
known as executive functions which affect students ability. Regarding the EFs this education
uses cognitive flexibility, working memory update, and selective attention. Gillam mentioned
that working memory was different in favor of the Montessori students. Time limit and screen
interface change the outcomes since the students aren’t used to these activities nor work under
pressure in their school environment. No other difference was stated but self-monitoring can
vary. Studies have shown these students have a capacity of deep concentration not only on
selective attention but also self-regulation. These children have been trained to have wide ranged
thinking behaviors that help with their creativity and executive skills. With a more explored
analysis, this showcases that creative competencies regulate academic success. As well they have
a more balanced global development that plays a vital role in their academic performance. Logos
Moreover, the writer makes use of ethos by having a word of a trustworthy person or
institution to provide a sense of trust of the information regarding Montessori education. Gillam
stated that Lillard and Else Quest show that children in Montessori education demonstrate
cognitive and socio-emotional advantages. Also a French study report shows advantages in both
divergent and convergent creativity for over 2 years. Children have improved faster in academic
achievement, social understanding, and mastery orientation. A study was conducted with the
Declaration of Helsinki and an ethical committee from Psychology and Education Faculty from
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the University of Geneva. Tests included scholastic assessments which include executive
analysis. Frontiers of psychology inform that executive functions can benefit children’s outcomes
in life. Programs have driven those EFs that help children on their skills. This use of programs
develop during the childhood phase which regulate the directed behavior. Studies are presented
such as working memory, children undergo training of sequence whether it be forward or reverse
order. Cognitive flexibility was tested as well, children are put in groups and play games that
develop their executive functions. The author used ethos with the use of psychology references.
In addition, the author applies evidence to show that Montessori students have increased
Copy-Design tasks showed improvements over the 2 years compared to Montessori and
traditional schoolchildren. These tasks grasp more of the children’s working memory capacity.
Montessori children have more autonomous thinking behaviors that drive their executive control.
Creative competencies regulate academic success that suggest they have good self-generated
ideas. This education has shown a more balanced development that promotes their academic
pedagogical approaches that make it possible for Montessori children to think this way. The
results of activities such as interaction, making choices during activities, leading projects, or
seeking answers on their own. Additionally, there was core evidence with Montessori students
scoring higher on scholastic tasks than traditional school children. In the test, report finds were
held in a socio-cultural environment, Switzerland, which emphasize the three core EF- selective
attention, working memory, and cognitive flexibility. The use of EFs shows the academic
outcomes it has in school years. Tests were performed such as reaction time using the Flanker
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test, and ascending digit for working memory. These outcomes had a good measure of global
scholastic development. A model was presented that shows creativity skills between Montessori
and traditional schools. This showcases the different percentages from kindergarten and
elementary age students. The author uses evidence to showcase that Montessori education is
In Conclusion, The author uses three rhetorical choices including logos, ethos, and
evidence. These three choices help to persuade people that Montessori education has better
academic performance than traditional schools. Montessori education has better functions that
impact kindergarten and elementary age students. The use of logos shows studies and results of
this institution’s performance. It has studies that consist of cognitive flexibility, working memory
update, and selective attention. Tests were performed on students to showcase their skills through
several tests such as language. Showed that Montessori students outperformed traditional schools
in all aspects. The use of ethos also helps in having the word of a trustworthy person which
include information from professionals such as the department of psychology. While the use of
evidence showcases the proof of the higher academic performance Montessori has.
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Work Cited
Denervaud, Solange, et al. “Beyond Executive Functions, Creativity Skills Benefit Academic
Outcomes: Insights from Montessori Education.” PloS One, vol. 14, no.11,2019, pp.
E0225319-e0225319, https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0225319.