Writing Task 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at

more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of

computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Raised by this question issue is a top subject on many discussion platforms

worldwide. It's a true, that technologically advanced world, with its new computer
technologies, machine learning, artificial intelligence, robotics, and other software
and hardware automatization tools are challenge humanity.

As vivid example may serve bookkeepers, that were immersed in a daily routine with
numbers of paper forms for enter and store data. Today's accountant work is much
simpler thanks to numerous applications and professional software. The second
important is an expansion of computer technologies to medicine and public health
sector, where artificial intelligence and machine learning technologies help doctors to
collect, analyse, and process a huge amount of data and recognize patient diagnosis.

On my opinion, modern technological progress and omnipresent computerisation and

automatization of routine processes are the civilization's evolution movement
indicator. Another thing, how successful it will be, determined our next generations.
What's more, I believe that this progress has a positive impact on humanity. Taking
on our monotonous routine, machines and computers give people an addition
motivation and serious reasons to be more creative, more sensitive, spiritual and
mentally improved. It's outstanding that we can see a few stages of the civilization
development. Our generation has seen the early technological leap in the middle of
20th century, the computer era breakthrough in the beginning of 21st, and today we
are on the threshold of a new awesome era, where a human is a creator of essence -
artificial intelligence essence. What amazing times we live!
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The text contents 250 words only.

The draft (native) of this text is below, please. There are all my mistakes on the
handwritten pages.