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Feedback Angelo Miranda
Feedback Angelo Miranda
(Esto se lo escribo a todos) General feedback: These are the steps; you
should have chosen at least seven of them.
My comments:
Choose gemstones that are suitable for the size of your design.
- The same as before.
Suitable gemstones are chosen.
Take the gold and silver grains to melt them into the shape of the design.
- Gold and silver grains are melted.
Quality control is carried out on the pieces resulting from the casting
process.
- Perfect, you wrote the sentence in passive voice!
Quality control is carried out.
The chosen ones have their imperfections removed and their edges
smoothed with a belt.
- The imperfections are removed from the chosen ones.
- Their edges are smoothed.
The piece is submerged in a liquid for an antique finish to enhance the final
look, to finish of, gemstones are embedded and then the charm is polished.
- Great job.