Name: Jaden Maldonado Date: 5 February 2024

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. Introducing my experiment in my intro. I will put my experiment in the intro to help ease the reader into the thesis.

2. Specifying what the effects of cold showers are in the introduction. I will put these into to help flow with the rest of
the introduction.

3. Indenting my paragraphs. I am doing this because every paragraph needs to be indented.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. Changing the format of my methodology paragraph. I am keeping it because it makes more sense and allows me to
talk more in the analysis about the experiment.

2. Uncombining some of the sentences. The sentences are fine the way they are and help reduce the choppiness.

3. Removing repeating words. I am keeping this because I do not like the repetitiveness of the paragraphs.

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. Finish my literature review.

2. Finish my conclusion

3. Finish my analysis

4. Write my reflection

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