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name pl incorrect

12/13

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incorrect

incorrect

incorrect

7/10

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of what ???

6/

3/

9/9

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i

than
2 punctuations can not come
together.
sp

their

we had

10/15

purpose and audience have got confused.


plus some grammatical errors!!!

Ayaan in the beginning you said it is our project. but you end with my project, why???
Plus if it is your project why you are writing to this friend.

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i

mention positively as
this para is of praise

vague statement.
decoration is not
a good idea with library.
library should be facilitating and should have comfortable environment.

why did you separate this info?

informal language?
required
i

good point

beneficial

c: 6
L: 5

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