4/29/24, 11:46 AM Rousseau OR Wollstonecraft Argument Map: Abby Gier

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4/29/24, 11:46 AM Rousseau OR Wollstonecraft Argument Map: Abby Gier

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Criteria Ratings

Provides a
textually-
based answer
to each Comments
segment of Each segment of the map is textually based with accurate in-text citations
and a corresponding bibliography, but the Rousseau text is missing from
the map with
the bibliography. Revise this.
citations.
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Provides
substantial
reasoning.
Puts effort
into
explaining the
author's links
Comments
between Reasoning explains the chosen evidence and how it argues the claims
segments of and thesis. Excellent close reading analysis.
the argument
by making in-
depth
connections.
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Explains how
ideas in text
relate to other
texts we've
read in
concrete Comments
Strong relationship to Rousseau with specific examples. Add R to biblio
ways
(provides
examples).
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4/29/24, 11:46 AM Rousseau OR Wollstonecraft Argument Map: Abby Gier

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Criteria Ratings

Demonstrates
effort and
Comments
learning Overall an excellent analysis of Wollstonecraft's argument. Do add
view longer Rousseau's text to your bibliography and resubmit.
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