4/29/24, 12:00 PM Rossetti Argument Map : Abby Gier

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Provides a
textually-
based answer Comments
to each There is a clear, textually based answer in each segment of the map.
segment of
However, it seems that you are still not clear on the elements and how to
the map with
analyze a text using these different elements. Read the comments on your
citations. map and revise (A) (B) and (C)
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Provides
substantial
reasoning.
Puts effort
into
explaining the Comments
author's links Reasoning generally explains ideas but doesn't explain the quotes you
between chose. A close reading analysis would accomplish this goal. Ultimately the
reasoning should explain the quotes in relation to the claim and the thesis.
segments of
This is why you need to focus on one specific argument that Rossetti is
the argument
making rather than all the possible interpretations of her work.
by making in-
depth
connections.
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Explains how
ideas in text
relate to other
texts we've
read in
concrete Comments
Interesting connection to Walatta Petros.
ways
(provides
examples).
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Demonstrates
effort and
Comments
learning Overall you do need to revise this map. and resubmit it. See comments
view longer above and on map. Look back on previous maps. Ask Destiny for help.
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