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Hooking The Reader
Hooking The Reader
Hooking The Reader
by Jamil Ahmad
Do now – In silence
Then he was completely alone the thousands of birds which
had kept him company for a while had disappeared with
nothing to keep him occupied he became aware of his thirst
and hunger he tried to resist it for a while but as the pangs
grew sharper he finally walked over to the camel and opened
the bag containing food he ate a little drank some water and
then lay down squeezed against the dead camel as the
sandstorm approached.
“It was a queer, sultry summer, the “It is a truth universally acknowledged,
summer they electrocuted the that a single man in possession of a
Rosenbergs, and I didn’t know what I good fortune, must be in want of a wife.”
was doing in New York.” Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice (1813)
Sylvia Plath, The Bell Jar (1963)
“It was a bright cold day in April, and the “It was a pleasure to burn.”
clocks were striking thirteen.” Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451 (1953)
George Orwell, 1984 (1949)
“In my younger and more vulnerable “This is the saddest story I have ever
years my father gave me some advice heard.”
that I've been turning over in my mind Ford Madox Ford, The Good Soldier
ever since.” (1915)
F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Great Gatsby
(1925)
Describe a street scene in India – Think carefully about
how you open your description
described as subject(first
word). So we start with
‘the...’, or ‘she/he/it...’,
followed by the verb (action).
Eg: The lanky, unkempt fellow slinked down the canal
path ...
This way of structuring the
sentence can get a bit boring...
Different hooks
She froze.
They waited.
He fell to the ground, with a
thud.
Use ‘although’, or ‘despite’
as a sentence starter:
Different hooks
temperature:
At 6pm on an icy winter
evening...
Start with a name:
Different hooks
Like a colourful
carnival, we edged
our way through the
muddy streets.
Use an image
– begin with a Smiling and laughing,
simile… I led the way.