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93.5
1. Very well written paper.

2. Include more diagrams and real life examples in

your answer.

3. Presentation, flow and content is very good.

4. Approach to the case studies could be improved.

5. Refer to the micro comments for detailed

feedback

All the best

 Intro is
good

Also, mention the foundational values

You have to mention

the reasons for
weakening of values
and not the impacts
of it
Good
well covered

Good

marks:3.5
Intro is
good

well covered
 relevant
points
covered

good

valid points

Good

marks:4
Good intro

valid points
 Good

well covered

Good conclusion

marks:4
 Good intro

Good points
relevant
examples
mentione
d

Good
conclusion

marks:4
 Well written

Also, mention
why these
values
cannot be
taught at
school

Good points
covered
 Good

well written

Good

marks:3.5
 Good intro

valid points

Good
well covered

Good

marks:4
 Well
explained

valid points
 Good

very well
written,

Good
content

Good

marks:4
well defined

Good

well points
mentioned

Good
 well
presented
and covered

Good
conclusion

marks:4
 Intro is good

Good
 relevant points
mentioned

well
covered

Good

marks:4
 Intro is very
good

Good points
well covered

Good

conclusion is
fine

marks:4
 Intro is good

Good
 refer to model
ans for more
points and
examples.

Decent
conclusion

marks:3.5
Good intro

relevant
example
 Good

refer to
model
ans for
real life
examples

well concluded

marks:3.
5
Good

Good

well written

Good
relevant mention

Could also mention

how can compassion
be nurtured

Good

marks:4
Start with an intro,
Also mention the
stakeholders
invoved

Good
well covered
the possible outcomes
discussed in detail

very good
detailed and
systematic
course of
action taken
Good points

Good

marks:7.5
Start with an intro
well covered

Good
Analysed in detail.

well written

Good
relevant
points
covered

Good
 Good

marks:7.5
Start with an intro
and the
stakeholders
involved

valid points
Good
 refer to model ans for more
options available

Good
Right course
of action
taken.

well justified
 Good

marks:7
Start with
an intro

Good
Good, add more
points

refer to model
ans
Incomplete case study
Add more content to the case study

marks:4
Good
well covered

Good
refer to model ans
for more points

Good
 well covered

Good points
 Good

marks:7
Good intro
Also mention
the possible
outcomes both
postive and
negative for
each course of
action

Good
well covered

Good

marks:7.5