Class code: AV4 - T4T7 -

Student’s name: LE DUONG THAO NGUYEN

Peer editor’s name:
Date: 5/10/2023

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON ___

Unit:
Topic:

People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons and
effects of this?

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Introduction: Today, everyone spends a lot less time with their family than before. This can
happen for a number of reasons, from technology addiction to overwork. This article will
focus on the situation and the resulting consequences.
Conclusion: All in all, the trend of spending less and less time with family is due to the
generation gap and the increase in personal entertainment. Furthermore, this development
has a negative impact on the well-being of both individuals and their families.

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Today, everyone spends a lot less time with their family than before. This can happen for a number of
reasons, from technology addiction to overwork. This article will focus on the situation and the
resulting consequences.
First of all, I think the main reason for this is overwork. Since most people work longer hours at work,
they have less time for their families. The second reason is that most people are addicted to social
media these days. They spend a lot of time sitting in front of their laptops or chatting online, wasting
their precious time.
In terms of impact, this situation results in people not having time to hang out with their loved ones,
which is especially important for children. This can leave young people feeling separated from their
families and have a negative impact on their development. The second reason is that they may not be
very social because they are addicted to work. If they are constantly overworked, they may become
isolated from humans.
All in all, the trend of spending less and less time with family is due to the generation gap and the
increase in personal entertainment. Furthermore, this development has a negative impact on the
well-being of both individuals and their families.

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