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Enc 1121 Stylus Writings
Enc 1121 Stylus Writings
Professor Gonzalez
ENC 1102
11 January 2024
The author’s main idea of the article is that due to the rapid expansion in technological
advancement and usage, “phishers” who are essentially frauds who impersonate major
corporations, sites, or other people (Colmenares 1) have been able to scam people and obtain
information from people that otherwise would not give it to these “phishers.” The author is really
effective at getting her message across to those who are reading. She uses a lot of self research to
prove to any readers that these “phishers” are a problem and are just out to scam people and take
their information. The research method that the author uses is an effective way of gaining
support through her article, she uses her own examples of people trying to scam her as research
evidence to push her idea which is extremely effective. She used an example of where she used
her email, where she had received some scammer emails, some flagged by UCF, and some were
not (Colmenares 3). I believe that the author's opinion that due to the rapid expansion of
technology usage, it is becoming more and more common to get scammed by these “phishers”
and that it should be a real concern. I agree with this because I too have also been emailed and
reached out to by these “phishers.” This topic is very much an issue in today’s world as there are
countless numbers of people all across the world who are getting scammed and robbed by all
these different “phishers” just trying to take people’s information and money. Their research can
help contribute to studies because she used self research, which other studies can use to continue
The author’s main idea of this story is to help themselves understand how different content
creators use different methods and have different purposes, to try and understand the gap
between what information is real, and what information is fake (Olajide 1). The author is very
good at conveying her ideas with the readers and using good sources of gathering information to
push her ideas in a meaningful way. To do the research, the author looked between the
differences of several medical examiners on TikTok and looked at the different methods they
used to spread their information and how it differentiates (Olajide 3). They also looked into the
different TikTok Ai features to display how TikTok displays the information. I agree with the
author that there are many different things that go into how information is processed and
spreaded all across TikTok, but that it also has a lot to do with the viewer and audience
determining what they see and what they don’t see. This is a very active real world issue as
TikTok and its Ai formulas have sort of become a focal point in courts all across America
pertaining to whether or not it should be allowed and if it is safe to use. The research can be used
to contribute to other studies because it is all first hand information that was recorded down by