I.

Introduction

A. Thesis Statement: I strongly advocate the introduction and enforcement

of laws which prohibit Marine Parks.
II. Body

A. Opposing Claim/argument: marine parks are needed for scientific

research.

a. Refutation

1. Physically, dolphin and whale biology change in marine park

conditions.

2. Socially, Marine Mammals’ behavior changed due to

training.

B. Thesis Support: Restatement of thesis statement.

Marine parks are unnecessary and cruel

Banning Marine Parks should be enforced.

a. They are inhumane and against animals’ rights.

b. Marine Parks lack the necessary supervision.

III. Conclusion

A. Restatement of thesis statement.

B. Summary of main thesis support
C. A statement of warning.