ORIGINAL:

The given line graph depicts the percentage of young citizens in the UK who have a
vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020.
Overall, the proportion of teenage vegetarians in the UK has experienced a period of
fluctuation across the survey area. Additionally, this growth rate reaching 10% has been
recorded until 2020.
Initially recorded as practically zero, the proportion of young vegetarians in the UK
skyrocketed to 15% in the first two decades. This number then decreased by about 10% until
2000, then recovered to about 10% of the population within 10 years and remained stable
thereafter.

EDITED:
The given line graph depicts the percentage of young citizens in the UK who have HAD
a vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020.
Overall, the proportion of teenage vegetarians in the UK has experienced a period of
fluctuation DURING THE SURVEYED PERIOD OF TIME across the survey area.
Additionally, this growth rate reaching 10% A TOTAL GROWTH OF 10% has been WAS
recorded IN THIS RESPECT until 2020.
Initially recorded as AT practically zero, the proportion of young vegetarians in the
UK skyrocketed to 15% in the first two decades. This number then decreased by about 10%
until 2000, then recovered BEFORE RECOVERING to about 10% of the population within
10 years and remained stable STABILIZING thereafter.
 FINAL
The given line graph depicts the percentage of young citizens in the UK who HAD a
vegetarian diet between 1960 and 2020.
Overall, the proportion of teenage vegetarians in the UK experienced a period of
fluctuation DURING THE SURVEYED PERIOD OF TIME. Additionally, A TOTAL
GROWTH OF 10% WAS recorded IN THIS RESPECT.
Initially recorded AT practically zero, the proportion of young vegetarians in the UK
skyrocketed to 15% in the first two decades. This number then decreased by about 10% until
2000 BEFORE RECOVERING to about 10% of the population within 10 years and
STABILIZING thereafter.
Pretty good.