11.9 - Khánh Huyền-Task 1-Writing.16

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The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different countries in 3

years.
ORIGINAL:
The given bar chart demonstrates the percentages of films created by five nations in
three consecutive years,from 2007 to 2009.
Overall,it is apparent that country A and country C witnessed a decline in the
quantities of movies made, while the reverse pattern was true for the other three nations,
that was, country B,country D and country E.
In 2007, the proportions of films produced in country A were the highest,exactly 80%,
but fell steadily to nearly 75% in 2009. In country C, the figures underwent a volatile trend.
The percentage is four times as less as those of country A. Reaching 20% in 2007, the
quantity rose marginally in the following years before decreasing by 2% in 2009.
In contrast, the figures for films made in countries B,D and E saw a slight growth. From
2007 to 2009, country B experienced an increase of 15%, took up 35% in the first year and
50% in the final. Besides, the rises were more modest about 4% in countries D and E,
accounted for 15% and 7%, correspondingly in 2009.

EDITED:
The given bar chart demonstrates the percentages PROPORTION of films MOVIES
created by five DISTINCT nations in three consecutive years, from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, it is apparent that country A and country C witnessed a decline in the
QUANTITY quantities of movies made, while the reverse pattern was true for the other three
nations. IN ADDITION, COUNTRY A WAS CONSISTENTLY DOMINANT IN THE VOLUME
OF FILMS PRODUCED THROUGHOUT THE SURVEYED PERIOD. , that was, country B,
country D and country E.
In 2007, the proportions PERCENTAGE of films produced in country A WAS were the
highest,exactly RECORDED AT A HIGH OF 80%; NEVERTHELESS, THIS NUMBER FELL
STEADILY BY NEARLY 5% IN THE NEXT TWO YEARS but fell steadily to nearly 75% in
2009. In country C, the figures MEANWHILE, THE FIGURE FOR COUNTRY C, WHICH
WAS ALWAYS ABOUT A QUARTER OF COUNTRY A’S, HOVERED AROUND 20%
DURING THE STUDIED TIMEFRAME. underwent a volatile trend. The percentage is four
times as less as those of country A. Reaching 20% in 2007, the quantity rose marginally in
the following years before decreasing by 2% in 2009.
In contrast, the figures NUMBER OF for films made in countries B, D and E ALL
EXPANDED BY VARYING DEGREES saw a slight growth. From 2007 to 2009
SPECIFICALLY, country B experienced an A RAPID increase of 15% IN THIS REGARD,
ENDING THE PERIOD WITH HALF OF ALL MOVIES SURVEYED PRODUCED BY THEM.
took up 35% in the first year and 50% in the final. Besides IN THE CASES OF COUNTRIES
D and D, the rises were more modest, AS THEIR FIGURES GREW BY APPROXIMATELY
4% TO REACH 15% AND 7% about 4% in countries D and E, accounted for 15% and 7%,
correspondingly, in 2009.

FINAL
The given bar chart demonstrates the PROPORTION of MOVIES created by five
DISTINCT nations in three consecutive years, from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, it is apparent that country A and country C witnessed a decline in the
QUANTITY of movies made, while the reverse pattern was true for the other three nations.
IN ADDITION, COUNTRY A WAS CONSISTENTLY DOMINANT IN THE VOLUME OF
FILMS PRODUCED THROUGHOUT THE SURVEYED PERIOD.
In 2007, the PERCENTAGE of films produced in country A WAS RECORDED AT A
HIGH OF 80%; NEVERTHELESS, THIS NUMBER FELL STEADILY BY NEARLY 5% IN
THE NEXT TWO YEARS. MEANWHILE, THE FIGURE FOR COUNTRY C, WHICH WAS
ALWAYS ABOUT A QUARTER OF COUNTRY A’S, HOVERED AROUND 20% DURING
THE STUDIED TIMEFRAME.
In contrast, the NUMBER OF films made in countries B, D and E ALL EXPANDED BY
VARYING DEGREES. SPECIFICALLY, country B experienced A RAPID increase of 15%
IN THIS REGARD, ENDING THE PERIOD WITH HALF OF ALL SURVEYED MOVIES
PRODUCED BY THEM. IN THE CASES OF COUNTRIES D and E, the rises were more
modest, AS THEIR FIGURES GREW BY APPROXIMATELY 4% TO REACH 15% AND
7%, correspondingly, in 2009.

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