ORIGINAL:

The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different countries in 3 years.
The provided bar chart compares five countries in terms of the percentages of films made in
three consecutive years, from 2007-2009
Overall, country A had the highest number of films produced. It is also notable that while there
was a decline in the figures for country A and C, the opposite was true for those of country B,
country C and country E.
The figures for film produced in countries E, D, E all rose slightly but especially, in country B
increased to a fairly high level from about 33% in 2007 to 50% in 2009.
Incontrast, there was a slight decline in the figures for countries A and C. Initially, The
percentages were highest in country A but the percentages decreased steadily by 3% each year
from 80% in 2007 to about 75% in 2009. As for country C, the percentage of years is not stable,
from 2007 to 2008 it increased by about 3% but by 2009 it decreased by 5%.

EDITED:
The provided bar chart compares five countries in terms of CHANGES IN the percentages
PERCENTAGE of films made BY FIVE DISTINCT NATIONS in three consecutive years, FROM
2007 TO 2009. from 2007-2009
Overall, country A had the highest number PERCENTAGE of films produced THROUGHOUT
THE ABOVE TIMEFRAME. IN ADDITION, it is also notable that while there was a decline in the
figures for country A and C, the opposite was true for those of IN THE CASE OF COUNTRIES
B, D AND E country B, country C (?) and country E.
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The figures for film produced in countries E, D, E all rose slightly but especially, in country B
increased to a fairly high level from about 33% in 2007 to 50% in 2009.
Incontrast, there was a slight decline in the figures for countries A and C. Initially, The
percentages were highest in country A but the percentages decreased steadily by 3% each year
from 80% in 2007 to about 75% in 2009. As for country C, the percentage of years is not stable,
from 2007 to 2008 it increased by about 3% but by 2009 it decreased by 5%.
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 FINAL
The provided bar chart compares CHANGES IN the PERCENTAGE of films made BY
FIVE DISTINCT NATIONS in three consecutive years, FROM 2007 TO 2009.
Overall, country A had the highest PERCENTAGE of films produced THROUGHOUT
THE ABOVE TIMEFRAME. IN ADDITION, it is also notable that while there was a decline in
the figures for country A and C, the opposite was true IN THE CASE OF COUNTRIES B, D
AND E.
IN 2007, MOVIES PRODUCED BY COUNTRY A COMPRISED 80% OF ALL MOVIES
SURVEYED, WHICH WAS FOUR TIMES COMPARED TO THAT OF COUNTRY C;
NEVERTHELESS, THIS NUMBER EXPERIENCED A MARGINAL DIP OF AROUND 2% FOR
EACH YEAR THAT FOLLOWED. MEANWHILE, COUNTRY C WITNESSED A DOWNWARD
FLUCTUATION, HOVERING AROUND THE 20% MARK THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE
PERIOD.
ON THE OTHER HAND, COUNTRIES B, D AND E ALL WITNESSED A GROWTH IN
THE PROPORTION OF FILMS PRODUCED BY THEM, ALTHOUGH BY VARYING
DEGREES. TO BE MORE SPECIFIC, THE NUMBER OF MOVIE PRODUCED IN THESE
THREE COUNTRIES UNDERWENT A STEADY RISE OF APPROXIMATELY 2% WITHIN
THE FIRST YEAR, REGISTERING AT 35%, 14% AND 5%, CORRESPONDINGLY. WHILE
THE OTHER TWO CONTINUED TO INCREASE AT THE SAME RATE, COUNTRY B’S
FIGURE SKYROCKETED TO ACCOUNT FOR HALF OF ALL STUDIED MOVIES BY 2009.