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Memo and Email Track Changes
To: SG Director
Date: 02/18/2024
Subject: Feedback on How to Change Your Bass Guitar Strings
Bass Part Descriptions: Participants frequently had trouble identifying specific parts located on
the bass guitar. The image provided was unclear and difficult to read. A list of the all the parts and
equipment used should be made available to the readers.
Brand of Guitar: Not all basses are made the same. We recommend more pictures be added for
those with different models.
Selection of Equipment: Many readers were overwhelmed by the options available for the
necessary equipment. These should be made clear in the beginning so that they will be able to
purchase the proper tools without confusion.
Direction of turners: It is crucial that all ambiguity is removed. Readers were confused with the
steps regarding the tuners. This is a complicated step and clarity is vital at this point.
After Care Clarification: Provide more detail on how the bass behaves after the strings are set.
Participants felt lost when they completed the instructions and did not get the sound immediately.
This causes them to think they messed up on a step and try to go backwards, which will lead to
actual mistakes.
Our goal is to make a guide that is simple and straightforward for the guitarist. Most are beginners and
will already be confused and we must be able to enable them to succeed with confidence. We will conduct
a second usability test and note any improvements that need to be made.
Sincerely,
David Hoyt
Marketing Director
Sword Guitars INC
(904-531-8008) | david.hoyt@gmail.com
From: David Hoyt (Marketing Director)
To: SG Director
Date: 02/18/2024
Subject: Feedback on How to Change Your Bass Guitar Strings
Summary:
The usability test was successful. We received valuable information that will help with improving our
instructions. Many participants said they appreciated how the instructions were laid out and how straight
forward everything was. The following will go into more detail how we can improve.
Result:
After conducting the usability test, we received a number ofseveral remarks that highlighted areas that we
could work on. Many of these include missing details outside of string changing and clarity on bass guitar
parts. After these concerns are implemented, we will improve the experience our readers will have.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, the feedback we received during the “How to Change Your Bass Strings” usability test
showed our strong points and weak points that must be improved on. These improvements will create a
more user-friendly experience.
Recommendations:
Based on the feedback, we recommend the following revisions:
To address Finding 1, add clear and descriptive layout of all of the bass guitar parts.
To address Finding 2, add pictures showing other bass guitar brands how all the parts relate to the
model bass.
To address Finding 3, add clear and descriptive information on types of strings and what sound to
expect, add list of brands for string cutters.
To address Finding 4, be clear on the direction the tuner must turn, be more descriptive on string
insertion.
To address Finding 5, be clearer on what to expect after strings are added, add steps to reduce fret
buzz, add steps to increase/decrease string height.