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Essay 1 Semester 2 Revised Essay
Essay 1 Semester 2 Revised Essay
Essay 1 Semester 2 Revised Essay
Jaden Maldonado
Instructor McCann
English 1302.231
9 February 2024
Introduction:
Cold showers have been popularized in recent years because of the positive effects they
have on the human body. A multitude of studies have been made in the past to highlight the best
things about cold showers. Researchers such as Yankouskaya et al. in “Short-Term Head-Out
Whole-Body Cold Water Immersion Facilities Positive Affect and Increases Interaction between
Large-Scale Brain Network” talks about how cold showers decrease the number of negative
effects but increase the positive effects of taking cold showers. The researchers stated that cold
showers have effects on mental, emotional, and physical health (Yankouskaya et al. 1). Some of
the positive effects are an increase in mood, vigor, and self-related activities. The negative
effects that get decreased are drops in mood, less fatigue, and help with depression symptoms.
However, it does not mean it works on everyone. Authors Briganti et al in “Effects of Cold
perception and exhaustion perception brought mixed results, as three studies11, 14, 15 did not find
any significative changes against controls. Meanwhile, two studies16, 17 did find significative
results with experimental subjects having lower perceived fatigue” (1). The experiment the
researcher/participant (RP) was doing was taking a cold shower for at least 20 minutes for 5
days. The cold showers were taken in the morning after RP woke up at 6:30 am. RP took cold
showers for five days to increase mental, emotional, and physical health.
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Literature Review:
Researchers have been highlighting the importance of showers for health recently. For
instance, Yankouskaya and colleagues noted that "Cold Water Immersion (CWI) has an impact
on boosting mood and fostering an emotional state" (2). The connection between the article and
the experiment is strong as they both aim for results. It underscores that cold showers do improve
wellbeing and can even affect personality traits. Both the article and the experiment sought to
investigate changes in mental and physical health. As shown, the article presents evidence that
supports the idea that cold showers play a role in enhancing wellbeing.
Moreover Briganti et al. discuss how cold-water triggers effects with studies dedicated to
exploring its benefits (1). While both the experiment and article show results there was a
difference in how long participants were exposed to water in the article. This variation suggests
that with periods outcomes, like those demonstrated by RP could have been further improved.
Methodology:
To begin with, RP is a 17-year-old male that has dual-enrollment classes. The experiment
lasted five days from Thursday to Monday. The RP tried to take a cold shower on Thursday, but
the water was too cold. RP was tired for most of the day while not being able to truly converse
with people. On Friday, RP tried to take a cold shower again and was able to take one that lasted
five minutes. The day went better for RP because he was able to talk to his friend with more
emotion. Also, RP was not feeling as tired as the day before. On Saturday, RP took a cold
shower for 15 minutes and decided to go for a run to start the day. The run was 3 miles and RP
felt stronger while running than he did during the rest of his runs. On Sunday, RP was able to
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take a cold shower for 20 minutes, which reached the set goal. RP went to the gym and was able
to lift stronger weights and felt less sluggish. On the final day, Monday, RP again took the cold
shower for 20 minutes. RP was massively different from the first day to the final day.
Results:
On the first day, Thursday, there was no data since the participant was not able to take the
cold shower due to it being too cold at first, so he settled for a warm shower. This day was
mostly used as a base of their mental, emotional, and physical health on a normal day.
The second day, Friday, the participant took a cold shower for 5 minutes instead of the
allotted 20 minutes and throughout the day noticed a change in emotional wellbeing. RP was
able to be more friendly and sociable when talking to friends. RP also felt noticeably less tired
The third day, Saturday, RP took a cold shower for 15 minutes and got closer to meeting
the goal of 20 minutes. RP saw a change in schedule by running after taking the cold shower and
saw improvements in their ability to run for longer distances. Also, RP was able to control their
The fourth day, Sunday, the participant was able to meet the goal and take a cold shower
for 20 minutes. RP went to the gym after taking the shower. RP notice physical improvements
such as being able to lift some stronger weights and being able to do cardio for longer.
On the final day, Monday, the participant took a 20-minute cold shower again. The
improvement RP saw over the five days was astronomical. The tiredness was no longer as
prominent. Also, the fatigue that was felt in the body was almost reduced to zero. RP was more
talkative, friendly, and approachable than the first day. The mental health received a huge boost.
RP felt better about himself and was able to feel at peace mentally.
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Analysis:
After the experiment RP finished and all of the research that was compiled, RP was able
to show that cold showers do improve mental, emotional, and physical health. As shown in the
Results section, taking cold showers in the morning can help not only relieve fatigue, but also
improve social and mental abilities. The experiment itself could be changed to meet people’s
needs, which in turn could improve or lessen the effects of the cold showers. For example, RP
took a cold shower for 20 minutes in the morning; however, a person could change how long the
cold showers would take and at what time during the day it would be taken. Such differences in
Conclusion:
The results, from the study closely align with what the researchers discussed in their
articles. The findings of the experiment support the thesis and other works in the field. This study
holds significance as it demonstrates that cold showers can indeed enhance an individual’s well
being. If the experiment had continued for a duration the outcomes might have been more
significant. While a 20 minute cold shower in the morning has shown benefits further research is
necessary to explore whether taking showers at night could be more effective and determine the
Works Cited
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and Psychological Variables.” Acta Physiologica, vol. 239, no. 4, 2023, pp. e14056-n/a,
https://doi.org/10.1111/apha.14056.
Positive Affect and Increases Interaction between Large-Scale Brain Networks.” Biology
https://doi.org/10.3390/biology12020211.