Diego A.

Morteo

ENGL 1301-203

Dr. Sharity Nelson

1 May 2024

Essay 3 One Last Revision

Within this essay I got to change some of the major things that were giving the essay some
problems of plagiarisms when it comes to the quotation part as I was not using the quotation
marks correctly. By this the feedback helped me to understand the importance of maintaining
academic integrity through the process of citating properly my quoting and sources as well to
also improving how to paraphrase correctly, this points out the significance in respecting the
work form other people or authors in order to avoid unintentional plagiarism. Also, I make sure
when paraphrasing that I was presenting some of my ideas while still attributing the document.
Adding to that, the feedback also helped in revising the structure of my body paragraphs since
they lacked a bit of organization including some clear understanding of the main point, which I
separated from the evidence given from the document for it to improve its clarity. Nonetheless I
needed to also reduce some of the quotations and focus on adding more of my analysis into the
essay in order to successfully contribute to the rhetorical appeals. Overall, the feedback helped
me to develop a deep understanding of the analytical writing process as I learned some skills in
citating, paraphrasing, and structuring my paragraphs, which is crucial for producing superior
academic essays, emphasizing in a continuous improvement when incorporating this feedback to
make better my analytical writing abilities.

Work Citation
Morteo, Diego. “Sports and Their Impact on Psychological Resilience” 10 Apr. 2024. ENGL

1301: English Composition 1, Texas A&M International University, student paper