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Argumentative Essay Final Draft
Argumentative Essay Final Draft
Chloe Wiklanski
Krepp
Composition
7 March 2024
Argumentative essay
In the United States,about 90% of teens use social media everyday (“Social
Media and Teens”). Social media has had major effects on people in many different
ways. For some people, it has had positive effects and they enjoy being on social
media, communicating with family and friends. People also enjoy expressing
themselves in a lot of ways. On the other hand social media can be negative especially
for teens and young adults. The negative part of social media is the bullying through the
screen and how people see their body image compared to others. Social media can
either affect you negatively with people cyberbullying others and influence body image,
or it can affect you positively where you can stay in contact with friends and family.
biggest negative effects of social media. Social media is the top platform for
cyberbullying (Bergman). The main platforms that people use to bully others are
Snapchat and Instagram (“Facts About Cyberbullying”). Teens use social media to bully
others through the screen and stay anonymous. About 42% of young kids between the
ages 12-17 have been bullied online in some way (“Facts About Cyberbullying”). Young
teens get bullied through social media and within 42% of the kids nothing gets done
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about the bullying. The 42% of kids that get bullied online, many of them get bullied in
different ways. Cyberbullying can affect people's mental health and it can lead to
depression and self harm (Bergman). Cyberbullying is serious and it can cause a lot of
major effects for people like depression, self harm, anxiety, and suicidal thoughts. While
cyberbullying has major effects on people, body positivity has major effects on people
as well.
Social media is bad for teen girls and how they feel about their bodies. Body
positivity has a huge effect due to social media. About 50% of teen girls struggle with
their body image because of social media (“How Social Media Impacts Body Image”).
Teen girls struggle with their body image because they compare themselves to others
that they see on social media. Social media on body positivity causes low self esteem
and it can also cause body dysmorphic. Teen girls often compare themselves to
celebrities or other people that they see on social media. When teens compare
themselves to other people it causes them to want to look like them and be like them
(“Social Media and Teens”). Apart from body positivity being a bad thing for young
teens, connecting with your friends and family through social media is a good thing.
One of the good things about social media is connecting with family and friends.
Connection with friends and family is one of the positive things about social media. you
can connect with friends through many different platforms on social media. It might be
hard to make friends face to face for some people if they are shy and making friends
online might be easier (Heimlich).Social media is also good for people who like to
express themselves. Expressing yourself online is a good way to show people your
creativity and your personality (Heimlich). Connecting with your family is a good thing
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especially if you don’t talk to your family you can stay in touch. It can also be a good
thing if you don’t live in the same state. Connecting with your friends and family is one
Social media has many effects on many things such as cyberbullying, body
positivity and connecting with friends and family. The three main effects social media
has on people are cyberbullying, body positivity and connecting with friends and family.
A lot of people struggle with social media whether it is people getting bullied online or
how teen girls struggle with how they see themself. This is good for social media such
as connecting with friends and family. Social media is a big part of people’s lives and it
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