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Task 2: Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday

life. Is this a positive or negative development?

In today's society, advertising has such a


huge impact
- Buyers are informed of newly-
launched products
- Companies/businesses easily
approach the potential customers
- many jobs relate to creativity
- advertising serves as a bridge
between manufacturers and
customers
In today's world, people are bombarded with advertisements on a variety of media channels. In
terms of advertising implications, I believe there are both positives and negatives.
Câu dẫn body 1:
………………………
Explain point:

Câu dẫn body 2:


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In conclusion, the development of businesses has given rise to the growing number of
advertisements, and this trend is, in my opinion, advantageous as well as detrimental.
Explain
Firstly, social media can make lots of people addicted to it. The newsfeed, likes and comments
grab people’s attention so that they can be distracted from their own work. Therefore, this
addiction can lead to productivity loss, affecting work and relationships.

1. Explain points: Social media, in particular the newsfeed, likes and comments grab
people’s attention.

(Social media can be addictive and can lead to people spending too much time on their phones or
computers. It can also be a source of cyberbullying and the spread of false information.
Additionally, social media can invade people's privacy and lead to identity theft. )

2. Reasons why this happen: (This is because) (…)


Human beings are considered a part of the community and cannot be separated from it,
they desire great feelings when other people put their eyes on them so it is hard not to
be disturbed by social media.

3. Consequences: ( this causes) Therefore, this addiction can lead to productivity loss,
affecting work and relationships.

Secondly, the great number of interesting applications /is encouraging people to spend hours
scrolling through short videos. This behavior triggers dopamine continually which can harm our
brain and leads us to a chain of losing interest in the future.

1. Explain points: A great number of interesting applications such as TikTok, Facebook, etc.
are encouraging people to spend hours scrolling through short videos.
2. Reasons why this happen? (This is because)
By creating a place where people can quickly share their thoughts and activities or show
their beauty to the world, people will feel satisfied by posting new feeds, hitting some
interesting stories or new knowledge just in the short time.
3. Consequences: This behavior triggers dopamine continually which can harm our brain
and leads us to a chain of losing interest in the future.

Moreover, social media always contain unexpectedly violent content and a culture of
comparison. People especially children and the young generation can easily engage in hurtful
and harmful behavior for themselves which can affect people’s physical and mental health

1. Explain points: Moreover, social media always contain unexpectedly violent content
including weapons, drugs, or even wars in real life. The users also build a culture of
comparison which makes them always compare how they look and their life to others.
(cultural discrimination).
2. Reasons why this happen? This is because
This is because most of the news around us is about influencers and stars who always
have luxury items and fancy outfits. The way they show people how they live makes us
want to be like them and start to talk about them.
at our fingertips.
3. Consequences: (this causes) . People especially children and the young generation can
easily engage in harmful behavior for themselves which can affect people’s physical and
mental health

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