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Reflection Essay 1 2nd
Reflection Essay 1 2nd
Reflection Essay 1 2nd
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Andruw Garcia
ENGL 1302-228
Trisha Briones
7 February 2024
Reflection Essay
For my first writing assignment I was introduced to a somewhat familiar prompt that with
topics, and looking thoroughly through several peer-reviewed articles provided a challenge
necessary for me to overcome. Academic research is more of a broad spectacle, in that it can be
vast and full of many different aspects of the field of academics. It can stem from basic research
like this essay to more sophisticated forms of gathering information to prove a specific theory
correct or incorrect. What I learned about this particular research will help aid me in other course
whenever it comes to figuring out where to find such forms of media. To elaborate, if I had a
research project in a history class about a specific event that occurred, I would be able to use my
document or reference that I can base my future essays on. Not to mention the peer-reviewed
articles manage to portray a variety of studies that all correlate to one another. That being said, I
am capable of grasping various perspectives on my topic at hand; therefore, I can base future
skill, the bibliography was a completely different concept that I was not used to. Unfortunately, I
was not prepared enough mentally for the struggles that were about to be thrown my way.
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However, having completed my writing assignment, I can conclude that my confidence was both
The feedback given helped vastly with my whole thought process as a writer. Since I
came into this project unprepared, the received feedback from my instructor allowed for a more
humbled perspective on my writing. A couple of factors that were altered in my essay were also
due to the feedback handed back. First, I changed the way I gathered the research, divulging into
a more descriptive yet less redundant manner to allow my summaries of each article to be more
comprehensible. Second altering the style of writing, instead of writing from the perspective of a
student reviewing the articles, I attempted to create a style in which I was a part of the project at
hand. I did so in order to create a more confident style to sound more sophisticated.
Although I cherished the criteria from my instructor, I also made sure that I tried to
understand the feedback presented to me from my classmates. In order for me to improve, I have
to learn to take constructive criticism from those who are also in the same boat as I am. I can
very easily say that my experience with past peer reviews has been diminished because I find it
difficult to trust the words of others who might be on a lower level of writing than I am.
However, just like every other thing in life, I had to take the leap of faith to trust the words of my
fellow classmates and was able to excel in my final draft. The main issue that occurred with my
peer review was the use of details or phrases that might come off as redundant in the eyes of
other students. As well as the overall flow of each paragraph, and how they came together to
form an easy understanding of my reviews of every article mentioned. Having changed those to
aspects, I can now see how the feedback from fellow students managed to aid me in the final
draft of my essay.
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By far the most challenging part of this essay was getting it done. Just like in my previous
English class, every essay managed to provide me with the same obstacle as this one. That being
following through and completing it on time. Commencing an essay usually is an essay feat for,
but halfway through if my motivation runs out, then I’ll be in a world of troubles. Not to mention
all the distractions that were inconveniently throwing themselves at me. The least challenging
aspect of this essay was finding the articles that I used in it. Since I was already provided with a
website to find articles, all I had to make sure was that they fit the topic that I was trying to
review in my paper.