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INSTRUCTIONS / निर्दे श
Please read each of the following instructions carefully before attempting questions:
कृपया प्रश्नों का उत्तर र्दे िे के पू र्व निम्ननिखित प्रत्ये क ुिेर्देश कन यानािपूर्वक पं:
1. There are TWO sections each having FOUR topics printed both in HINDI and in ENGLISH.
इसमें र्दन खण्ड हैं जिनमें से प्रत्ये क में चार जिषय हैं िोजक निन्दी एिं ुोंग्रेजी दोनों में छपे हैं ।
2. Write TWO essays, choosing ONE topic from each of the sections A and B.
3. Answers must be written in the medium authorized in the Admission Certificate which must be
stated clearly on the cover of this Question-cum-Answer (QCA) Booklet in the space provided. No
marks will be given for answers written in the medium other than the authorized one.
प्रश्ों के उत्तर उसी माध्यम में जिखे िाने चाजहए जिसका उल्ले ख आपके प्रिे श -पत्र में जकया गया है , और इस माध्यम का स्पष्ट
उल्ले ख प्रश्-सह-उत्तर (क्यू .सी.ए.) पुस्तिका के मुख-पृष्ठ पर अंजकत जनजदि ष्ट स्थान पर जकया िाना चाजहए। उस्तल्लस्तखत माध्यम के
अजतररक्त अन्य जकसी माध्यम में जिखे गए उत्तर पर कोई अंक नहीं जमिेंगे।
प्रश्ों में शब्द सीमा, िहां जिजनजदि ष्ट है , का अनुसरण जकया िाना चाजहए।
5. Any page or portion of the page left blank in the Question-cum-Answer Booklet must be clearly
struck off.
प्रश्-सह-उत्तर पुस्तिका में खािी छोड़ा हुआ पृष्ठ या उसके अंश को स्पष्ट रूप से काटा िाना चाजहए।
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SCALE
1. DEPTH OF UNDERSTANDING
1b. Content
Relevancy
Balanced view/approach
Enrichment (reports,
committees, data points, etc.)
2a. Structure
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
2b. Highlight/Underline
2d. Articulation
3. THE ESSENTIALS
3b. Language
Introduction – your introduction is good. Good that you have defined the
2. keywords of the thesis statement to establish a clear understanding of the
core theme of this essay
3. Body – you have explored good sub dimensions of the essay to make it
comprehensive. Valid mentioning of indexes and keywords to substantiate
your arguments throughout the essay
4. Since your content is good try to work on your presentation. To improve it
include flowcharts and diagrams. This will not only increase the visibility of
your content but also fetch you more marks
5.
Articulation is good. Language is lucid and clear
निबोंध
Essay
Questions-Cum-Answer (QCA)
QIP-MTS-20/FLT(Essay)-2
Student Name
Email ID
132
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Good that you
have mentioned
about individual
reforms.
Here to
substantiate your
argument you can
also mention the
quotation of
Ramana Maharshi
which is "self
reform,
automatically
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established by providing
historical linkage by
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Question No.) movements in India in the late
19th century.
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various social reformers such
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Mahatma Gandhi etc you can
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their achievements and efforts
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make your argument
comprehensive such as
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held in advocation of widow
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eradication of untouchability
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and caste biases , for the
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self-respect movement
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of keywords,
highlight them to
increase the
visibility of your
content and
make it more
readable
Good point
about
ethical
reforms.
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technological
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Your conclusion is
relevant. Good that you
have incorporated
various suggestions to
make it comprehensive
and holistic. Try to
conclude in 120–125
words.
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SCALE
1. DEPTH OF UNDERSTANDING
1b. Content
Relevancy
Balanced view/approach
Enrichment (reports,
committees, data points, etc.)
2a. Structure
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
2b. Highlight/Underline
2d. Articulation
3. THE ESSENTIALS
3b. Language
Conclusion is good. Good that you have included various suggestions to make it holistic.
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Your introduction is
satisfactory.
Good that with the help of
an example you have c\ . ~. -rro V-0
explained the core theme of - ~
the essay. But instead of
writing fictitious stories try to ~ ~ . . . - - - V\ u-t, -,:rfYO m
include anecdotes/famous
examples and quotations u..e d . ~ TVQ
related to the thesis
statement to establish a
better understanding of the
core theme of the essay.
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You can include the
following anecdotes and V'O c::/'O
quotations in your
introduction to make it more
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Abdul Kalam was born in a
poor family in Tamil Nadu.
His father was an imam and
a boat owner. In order to
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add to his family’s income
Kalam had to sell 0\ Nt\- ~0'1 "YN( 0~ -
newspapers during his early
years. Despite financial
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compromised on investing in
his and his brothers
education. Result was India V\
got its first missile man as
well as a successful
president. Kalam even had VP:--P 'flVt -\Wl Q1.. .
played an important role in
country’s nuclear weapon
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Good constitutional
linkage established.
Here to substantiate
your argument you
can also mention
the provisions of the
Constitution which
deals with
education/education
al institutions such
as
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mention that
education helps in
inculcating critical
thinking along with
awareness of the
environment which
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further enables a
person to take an
informed decision
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Good point about how
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education helps a
person to realise the
true meaning of
democracy and hold
the government
accountable. Good that
you have explored the
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political dimension of
the thesis statement
Today there is an
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common man. If a
common man cannot
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a vibrant democracy
. In democracy index
2019 by the economist
intelligence unit, India
was placed in the
flawed democracy
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scenario can be
changed by investing in
political education
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Good point about
poverty, low health
outcomes,
malnutrition etc.
Here you can also
link poverty with
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unemployment
which further is the
cause of low levels
of literacy. There for
in order to fight
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poverty we first
need to fight
illiteracy
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international
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Improving research in higher educational
institutes by setting up a research
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The national education policy aims to
increase the GER in higher education by
50% by 2035 I
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