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Chanel Nez - Mwa2
Chanel Nez - Mwa2
By Alice Munro
March 6, 1977
Chanel A. Nez
Composition II ENGL-1120-085
Introduction
Alice Munro______.
Royal beatings were given to a child who did not deserve them. Her words were never
taken into consideration. Her stepmother Flo would not reason with her, instead Flo assigned the
royal beatings. As her father gave the royal beatings, he never listened to his own daughter if she
ever dares to say something. The title itself focuses on the main event that changed how Nadine
viewed her father and Flo, leading to a bigger impact on her stepmother’s life later down the line.
The story focuses on the outcomes of a person’s life based on how they treat others. In the story
Nadine appears to be closer to Flo but observes her father more attentively. At the time of her
father’s adjudication, Nadine was not allowed to defend herself while Flo, the plaintiff, kept
feeding more reason to settle on a royal beating. Nadine never stood a chance, she was not given
a chance, Flo’s argument was partially invalid, and her father did not mind playing the part of an
abuser. The unjust actions towards Nadine will only add onto the miseries of Flo and her father’s
The Royal Beatings took place in Hanratty, Ontario throughout many years of Nadine’s
childhood and the story ends in Vancouver during her middle aged life. Nadine’s childhood took
place during the Great Depression era and WWII somewhere during her adolescence. Nadine
was a young girl who had been very observant and curious about her father Harry, at times even
took interest in whatever her stepmother Flo had to say of others. Harry took pride in his work,
refurbishing furniture, as Flo took over what had been Nadine’s mother’s store after marrying
Harry. Flo had a son with Henry, of whom they named Brian. Brain is Nadine’s half-younger
brother that is rarely mentioned throughout the story. Although Nadine does share a not so
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appreciated rhyme by the adults. Nadine remembers a silly rhyme and tells Brian who cannot
stop saying it because it is catchy. Flo then point’s outs Nadine’s immaturity in doing so, now
seeing her as a bad influence on Brian, Brian immediately leaves the room. At the time Nadine
was 11 or 12, her and Flo came to a disagreement as Flo had followed up with a claim to have
had sacrificed a lot for Nadine. Nadine knows that it is untrue, that Flo is exaggerating and is
expecting Nadine to forever be grateful to her. Then Flo intently threw a cleaning rag at Nadine
in which landed on her ankle. Nadine intently swung it around her ankle in which Flo gets
extremely upset and calls upon Nadine’s father to discipline her. As Flo explains to Harry what
had just occurred between them, she includes false information, as Nadine starts to counter argue
against Flo. It was clear her father did not want to hear a word from Nadine as he stops her from
speaking any more. He does not give it a second thought after he stops Flo from explaining as to
why Nadine is deserving of a punishment. Henry goes after Nadine, he beats on her as if he were
a gorilla violently attacking a wonderer, not to kill but to intently hurt. Going forward three to
four years later, Nadine was not receiving anymore beatings, it may have been due to her age or
Harry’s. A year after WWII ended her father passed, Nadine moved to Vancouver sometime
Flo doesn’t mind gossiping not knowing the full truth of a story, she judges others
quickly without looking at herself, and can be small minded. Once she and Nadine appeared to
be close before Nadine was able to attend school. Flo then shared stories of others and what had
once been the gossip of the town, like Becky Tyde’s life story. Nadine one day remembers a
catchy inappropriate phrase or rhyme and shared it with her younger half-brother Brian. Whom
then repeats the phrase without a second thought endlessly. Flo does not appreciate what Brian is
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saying, knowing it was Nadine who taught it to him because she asked Flo what it had meant
before because she heard it at school. After Brain ran off after Flo warns him to not say it
again…
What do they have to say to each other?... Flo speaks of Nadine’s smart-aleck behavior,
rudeness, sloppiness, conceit, willingness to make work for others, and ingratitude. She
name…“You think you’re somebody,” says Flo. “Who do you think you are?” Nadine
contradicts and objects with a poisonous readiness and mildness, displays theatrical
unconcern. Flo goes beyond her ordinary scorn and becomes amazingly theatrical herself,
saying it was for Nadine she sacrificed her life. She saw the father saddled with a
daughter and thought, What is that man going to do? So she married him, and here she is,
on her knees.i
Nadine is now furious with Flo’s claims while Flo is growing tired of Nadine’s influence on her
son. Flo then calls for husband, Nadine’s father, Harry to punish Nadine for being every negative
thing Flo believes she is. Before fully telling Harry everything she has to say about Nadine, Flo
starts to close and lock the doors and windows. Assuring no escape from Harry and any possible
witnesses.
“Well, we don’t need the public in on this, that’s one thing,” Flo says, and she goes to
lock the door of the store, putting in the window the sign that says “Back Soon”…“Oh, I
don’t know,” she says, in a voice worn down from its emotional peak. “I don’t know what
to do about her.” She looks down, following Nadine’s eyes, and sees her dirty knees, and
rubs them viciously with her hands, smearing the first around. “She humiliates me,” Flo
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says, straightening up. There it is, the explanation, the discovery. “She tries to humiliate
When Flo returns, she adds more wood to what the ignited fire would be that she started
within Harry. Now it is lies that are beginning to pour. As a reader Nadine is not the reason for
Flo’s humiliation, Flo’s own actions are, as she is quick to judge and imitate others behind closed
doors. Flo appears to pinpoint any negative thing she can on Nadine, who is not her child and a
An Important Quote
Prior to the contents of this quote, Flo watches Harry gives Nadine a beating, a royal
beating that she herself assigned Nadine. Moments before Harry begins the process, Flo asks him
to not be too hard, to give her a talking to but he ignores Flo. He beats Nadine in a way no child
should be punished. Flo is frighted by the man she is seeing, as Nadine begs for forgiveness until
she lost her will to talk but let out shrieks of pain. Her father grows tired and practically beat
Nadine towards Flo as a sign to remove her as he is tired. Flo instructs Nadine to leave the room
while she has the chance. Nadine then quietly makes her way back to her room. She falls onto
her bed and listens to Flo’s sniffles. Harry makes clear to Flo that she was the cause for the
beating, that it was what she asked him to do, and if she didn’t want just that, she shouldn’t have
recommended it.
They argue back and forth on this, Flo’s frightened voice growing stronger, steadier,
getting its confidence back. By stages, by arguing, they are being drawn back into
themselves. Soon only Flo is talking; he will not talk anymore. Nadine’s sobbing has had
to subside rather quickly, to let her listen, and when she loses interest in listening, wants
to sob some more, she finds she can’t work herself up to it. She has passed into a state of
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calm, in which outrage is complete and final. She will never speak to them again, she will
never look at them with anything but loathing, she will never forgive them. She will
punish them, she will finish them. Encased in these finalities, and in her pain, she floats
Nadine decides, in that moment, she will never forgive nor give either of them a second
thought. Here is where her curiosity and attentive observations end. She is physically and
mentally exhausted from undergoing such a punishment as she cannot even cry anymore. Her
exhaustion puts her in a state of recovery, her state of calmness, despite being so angry with Flo
and Harry. In that very moment, she is set on never allowing them to take part in her life. She has
decided to not care or give them pleasure through self-inflicted pain, that included absence
because what they did to her was wrong, this one of few similarities she has with another
Royal beating. That was Flo’s promise. “Nadine, you are going to get one royal beating.
“The words lolled on Flo’s tongue, took on trappings. Nadine was a child with no need to
picture things, to pursue absurdities, and the first time she heard this threat, instead of
taking it to heart she pondered: How is a beating royal? She came up with a three-lined
avenue, a crowd of formal spectators, some white horses and black slaves. The blood
The opening paragraph introduces the two main characters at focus. That being Nadine
and her stepmother Flo. This introductory paragraph tells the reader who is going to receive the
royal beatings, and who is assigning. Nadine, being the receiver, in face with the threat cannot
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help but to wonder what could make a beating royal. Her imagination shows her lack of logic,
In real life it was Nadine’s father who was the kind of the royal beatings. Flo was her
stepmother, and the beatings she gave never amounted to much-they were quick cuffs...
“you get out of my road,” she would say. “You mind your own business. You take that
look off your face.” But it was up to Flo to supply the royal beatings with dignity, to
Here, we as readers are informed of who is giving the royal beatings. Nadine’s father,
who we learn later in the story is named Harry, is called the king of royal beatings. This
emphasizes his strength and how serious he takes on his role as punisher. The part where Flo
contributes a high necessity and regret to the atmosphere is a bit of foreshadowing because we do
not know as to how she handles the assigning and the aftermath of the royal beatings. When Flo
would assign the beatings, she did it with confidence at first and anger towards Nadine, that was
her dignity. In the face of Flo’s regret Harry did not back down from his assignment. He would
He doesn’t answer. The belt is coming off, but not hastily. Now it is being grasped at the
necessary point. “All right, you.” He comes over to Nadine, pushed her off the table. His
face like his voice, is entirely out of character. He is like a bad actor who turns a part
about this, so that Nadine will have no doubt about it, so that he himself will have no
doubt. That does not mean that he is pretending, that he is not real. He is real and he is
Nadine, as observant as she had been could not even predict the outcomes of her first
royal beating. She thought she knew her father as she had watched him for years. First, she
assumed that he was acting, that he was not going to hurt her as bad because of the assignment
was absurd. In the very moment as he moved towards Nadine, she quickly realizes that it is
happening, that he was not holding back. Nadine then affirms her father is not just playing a role,
he will fulfill it. Just like all the royal beatings that were assigned after that day by Flo.
The beatings stopped after three or four years, either because Nadine was getting too
shamefully big or because her father no longer had the strength to deliver them or simply
because the time for them had passed-like the time for losing baby teeth.vii
Now, Nadine is fifteen or sixteen, she is not receiving the royal beatings anymore. She
concluded it was either because she grew out of it with age or her father was just getting too old
to carry them out. The fact that Flo had once filled the air with regret was no longer. This can be
a result to more assigned royal beatings in the following three to four years after Nadine’s first.
Well her father died a year after the second World War II. After his passing, Nadine was still at
home because Flo had gone to Nadine to ask about a term, she was unfamiliar with in her
father’s notes: Spinoza. Nadine knew what it was but told Flo that she did not, confirming her
long silent towards her. Fast forwarding to what I would assume is Nadine in her middle aged
life, she lives happily. One morning in Vancouver, in her home, on a Sunday, with her partner
who slept in, turned on the radio as she looked outside her window, she has one heck of a view. If
you are like me, I was confused as to why the interview with an old man was important, and why
There was a pause-of appreciation, it would seem-then the announcer’s voice saying that
the foregoing had been an interview with Mr. Wilfred Nettleton, of Hanratty, Ontario,
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recorded on his hungered-and-second birthday, two weeks before his death last spring. A
living link with our past, Mr. Nettleton had been interviewed in the Wawanosh Country
It was because the person being interviewed was Hat Nettleton, the name was not
ringing any bells because he was not an important character, until I went back to the Becky Tyde
story, it was shared by Flo. He was one of the three men who gave Becky Tyde’s father a horse
whipping for being such a bad man, he abused his daughter Becky more than any other of her
siblings, his wife also passed on early, and after the rumors of impregnating his daughter Becky
to supposedly dispose of it caused the town to give him a lesson. A few of the town’s people
assigned Hat Nettleton and two other men to beat up Becky Tyde’s father. In which they did and
were later arrested after his death but were released approximately two years after serving time.
… But Flo was in the same place Hat Nettleton had died in; she had been there when that
interview was made, though she would not have heard it, would not even have known
about it. It didn’t matter to Flo where she was. After Nadine put her in the Home, a
couple of years earlier, she had stopped talking. She had removed herself, and spent most
of her time curled up into a corner of her crib, where she sat looking crafty and
disagreeable, not answering anybody, though she occasionally showed her feelings by
biting a nurse.ix
Nadine’s pause for appreciation was because she knew that Flo was in the very same
place as Hat Nettleton, who eventually passed shortly after his interview at the age of one
hundred and two. Meaning Flo lived miserably from the days Nadine has put her in the home.
Since her son Brian did not interfere or take his mother Flo out of the home, it is safe to conclude
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that she may have neglected or partially treated him as poorly as she did Nadine. Her treatment
towards both, mainly Nadine has led her to the misery of her life, and her isolation from society.
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