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Tanisha SInha 14 04 2024 Lyst1713116868788
Tanisha SInha 14 04 2024 Lyst1713116868788
Tanisha SInha 14 04 2024 Lyst1713116868788
Assessment
Sheet
2) Scope-
Directing - It is a wider scope
Supervision - It is a narrower scope
3) Execution
Directing - It is done by managers
Supervision- It is done by supervisor
4) Level of management
Directing - It is performed by all the level of management whether top,
middle or lower level.
Supervision- It is exercised by foreman or lower level management.
5) Result
Directing - Directing brings motivation among employees to complete
the task. Manager instill a sense of pride among them and employees
achieve the task considering it as their duty.
Supervision and directions are two terms which are often used
interchangeably. Directing is a comprehensive and broader term that * Optimistic
* Concise
includes motivating, inspiring and leading employees along with getting
the task done by them whereas supervision is a simple element
performed to get the work done by providing supervision.
Body Competence
1) Content Competence
2) Structure Competence
3) Example/Reports/etc.
Conclusion Competence
1) Synthesis
2) Optimistic/solution
Language Competence
(Spelling/ Grammar/
Wordlimit)
Remark
Introduction Competence
1. Relevance:
Feedback: The introduction appropriately sets the context by defining
directing and supervision, indicating a basic understanding of the
concepts.
Area of Improvement with proper example: The introduction could be
enhanced by including a brief explanation of why understanding the
distinction between directing and supervision is important for
management practices. For instance: "Understanding the distinct roles of
directing and supervision is crucial for effective management, as each
plays a different role in organizational success."
2. Conciseness:
Feedback: The introduction is concise, fitting within the recommended
proportion of the total word count.
Area of Improvement with proper example: While concise, the
introduction could benefit from a tighter focus on the key thematic
differences rather than simply stating what each term means. For
example, "Directing and supervision, though often interrelated, serve
unique functions in management: directing is strategic, while supervision
is operational."
3. Link to the Body:
Feedback: The introduction mentions that the body will explore
differences between the concepts, which provides a clear link.
Body Competence
1) Content Competence
2) Structure Competence
3) Example/Reports/etc.
Conclusion Competence
1) Synthesis
2) Optimistic/solution
Language Competence
(Spelling/ Grammar/
Wordlimit)
Remark
Introduction Competence
1. Relevance:
Feedback: The introduction begins by defining management and
referencing Simon's framework, which includes management processes
like planning, organizing, staffing, directing, and controlling. This approach
somewhat addresses the question prompt but does not directly engage
with the statement "Management is a Science."
Area of Improvement with proper example: The introduction should
clearly state the debate around management being considered a science.
For example, "Management, often viewed through various lenses—art,
science, and profession—holds characteristics that support its
classification as a science. This essay explores these characteristics to
substantiate this viewpoint."
2. Conciseness:
Feedback: The introduction provides a broad definition of management
but includes redundant explanations that could be streamlined.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Focus on succinctly
introducing the debate around management as a science, and mention
that the essay will explore both sides. For example, "Management,
encompassing various essential business functions, is frequently debated
regarding its nature. This discussion will examine whether management
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Section- II
Ques.2) Explain the different functions of management.
[Marks: 15, Word Limit: 600, Difficulty Level: Difficult]
Management is the process of getting the work done by others * Partially Relevant
effectively and efficiently. Simon gave the five functions of * Not Concise
management that are planning, organizing, staffing, directing and * Proper connecting line
controlling. given
1) Planning -
2) Organizing
* Coordination is maintained.
3) Staffing
4) Directing
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* It is the process of motivating, inspiring, communicating
employees to get the work done by subordinates. It is called the
heart of management.
5) Controlling
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Points of Evaluation Very Poor Poor Average Good Excellent
Introduction Competence
1) Relevance
2) Conciseness
3) Links to the Body
Body Competence
1) Content Competence
2) Structure Competence
3) Example/Reports/etc.
Conclusion Competence
1) Synthesis
2) Optimistic/solution
Language Competence
(Spelling/ Grammar/
Wordlimit)
Remark
Introduction Competence
1. Relevance:
Feedback: The introduction identifies the key functions of management as
outlined by Simon, which effectively sets the stage for a detailed
discussion on these functions.
Area of Improvement with proper example: To strengthen the relevance,
the introduction could benefit from a brief mention of why understanding
these functions is critical for effective management. For example, "An in-
depth understanding of the five key functions of management, as outlined
by Simon, is crucial for effective leadership and operational success in any
organization."
2. Conciseness:
Feedback: The introduction is concise, directly introducing the main topic
without unnecessary detail.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Ensure that the introduction
remains concise but comprehensive by succinctly summarizing what will
be covered regarding each management function.
3. Link to the Body:
Feedback: The introduction mentions the management functions that will
be discussed, providing a natural link to the body.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Enhance the transition by
specifying how each function contributes to organizational goals, setting
up a framework for the detailed discussion in the body, such as, "We will
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explore how each function — from planning to controlling — plays a
distinct yet interconnected role in achieving strategic and operational
objectives."
Body Competence
1. Structural Competence:
Feedback: The body is organized according to each management function,
with separate paragraphs for planning, organizing, staffing, directing, and
controlling. However, the structure could be improved with clearer
headings for each section.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Use bold headings for each
management function to improve readability and structure, such as
"Planning: Establishing Objectives," "Organizing: Structuring Teams," etc.
2. Content Competence:
Feedback: The content provides basic descriptions of each function but
lacks depth and specific examples that illustrate their application in real-
world scenarios.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Enhance content depth by
including examples of how each function is applied in different
organizational contexts. For example, explain how a technology company
might approach staffing differently from a manufacturing firm.
3. Use of Examples/Reports:
Feedback: The response does not include specific examples or reports that
would help illustrate the practical application of the discussed
management functions.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Integrate examples or case
studies that demonstrate the functions in action, such as how a well-
known company successfully implemented a strategic plan or how a
startup organizes its resources for efficiency.
Conclusion Competence
1. Synthesis:
Feedback: The answer lacks a formal conclusion, which leaves the
discussion incomplete.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Conclude by summarizing the
importance of mastering these functions for management success. For
example, "In conclusion, mastering these five management functions
enables leaders to craft strategic responses to business challenges,
ensuring organizational agility and sustained growth."
2. Optimistic/solution oriented:
Feedback: There is no forward-looking or optimistic perspective on how
management might evolve with these functions.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Offer insights into how these
management functions could adapt to future business trends, such as
increased remote work or artificial intelligence in the workplace.
Language Competence
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Feedback: The language use is clear but can benefit from more precise
terminology and better integration of management concepts.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Improve terminology precision by
defining specific management terms and concepts used in the discussion. Ensure
correct grammar and punctuation to enhance the professionalism of the text.
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Ques.3) Write about the various principles of management
given by Henry Fayol
[Marks: 15, Word Limit: 600, Difficulty Level: Moderate]
Henry Fayol gave the fourteen principles of management. It is
called classical theory of management. It focusses more on work * Partially Relevant
* Not Concise
and productivity and considers employees as a tool for production. * Proper connecting line
It ignores the human relation and external environment. given
1) Division of work - All the works are divided into units and each
unit of work is assigned to the person who is physically and
intellectually fit to perform that work.
* Micro-questions answered
* Partial Content
2) Authority and responsibility - Authority is the power to assign * Structured better
work to subordinates and extracting obedience from them. * Word limit met
Responsibility is the obligation of the subordinates to perform the * Logical flow proper
* Examples and data given
task assigned to them by superior.
5) Unity of direction- It means one boss for one plan. Activities with
same goals should be placed in one group. This will make the work
easier and the goals can be achieved easily.
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10) Order- It means that everything should be placed at right place
to eliminate waste of time.
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Points of Evaluation Very Poor Poor Average Good Excellent
Introduction Competence
1) Relevance
2) Conciseness
3) Links to the Body
Body Competence
1) Content Competence
2) Structure Competence
3) Example/Reports/etc.
Conclusion Competence
1) Synthesis
2) Optimistic/solution
Language Competence
(Spelling/ Grammar/
Wordlimit)
Remark
Introduction Competence
1. Relevance:
Feedback: The introduction provides an overview of the 14 principles of
management by Henri Fayol, correctly setting the stage for a discussion on
classical management theory. It captures the essence of Fayol's influence
on management practices.
Area of Improvement with proper example: To further enhance
relevance, the introduction could include a brief statement on the lasting
impact of these principles on modern management practices, such as
"Fayol's principles have laid the groundwork for modern management
theories, emphasizing efficiency and systematic approaches to
organizational governance."
2. Conciseness:
Feedback: The introduction is concise, efficiently leading into the
discussion of each principle.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Maintain conciseness while
adding a touch more context about the evolution or significance of these
principles in contemporary settings, ensuring a smooth transition into the
main body.
3. Link to the Body:
Feedback: The introduction mentions the principles and sets expectations
for their detailed discussion, effectively linking to the body of the answer.
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Area of Improvement with proper example: Strengthen this link by
explicitly stating that the discussion will explore how each principle can be
applied in current management scenarios, providing a practical framework
for the subsequent sections.
Body Competence
1. Structural Competence:
Feedback: The body systematically addresses each of Fayol's principles,
listing them with brief explanations. However, the structure could be
improved by more clearly distinguishing each principle with subheadings
or bullet points.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Use clear subheadings for
each principle, such as "1. Division of Work: Enhancing Efficiency," to
improve readability and organization.
2. Content Competence:
Feedback: The content covers all 14 principles but does so in a somewhat
superficial manner without deeply engaging with each principle's
implications or modern relevance.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Expand on each principle
with modern examples or case studies that illustrate their application and
relevance today. For instance, discuss how the "Unity of Direction" is
crucial in multinational corporations operating across diverse geographic
locations.
3. Use of Examples/Reports:
Feedback: The response lacks specific examples or contextual applications
that would enrich the understanding of how Fayol's principles are utilized
in modern organizations.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Integrate real-world
examples, such as how Google applies the "Esprit de Corps" to foster a
collaborative and innovative work environment, enhancing team spirit and
organizational success.
Conclusion Competence
1. Synthesis:
Feedback: The answer lacks a formal conclusion, which would be
necessary to succinctly summarize the discussion and reinforce the
principles' ongoing relevance.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Include a conclusion that not
only synthesizes the discussion but also reflects on the enduring legacy of
Fayol’s principles in shaping effective management practices. For example,
"In conclusion, Henri Fayol's principles continue to underpin foundational
management strategies, proving their timeless relevance in fostering
organizational efficiency and success."
2. Optimistic/solution oriented:
Feedback: No forward-looking or optimistic perspective is provided on
how these principles could be adapted or evolved.
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Area of Improvement with proper example: The conclusion could suggest
how these principles might be adapted to meet the challenges of the
digital age, emphasizing innovation in management practices.
Language Competence
Feedback: The language is generally clear but could benefit from more precise
and varied vocabulary to better articulate management concepts.
Area of Improvement with proper example: Ensure clarity and precision in
language by avoiding repetitive phrasing and integrating more varied vocabulary.
Check grammar and punctuation carefully to maintain professionalism.
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