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Modern building change the character and

appearance of towns and cities.The government
should insist that new buildings be built in traditional
styles to protect cultural identity.To what extent do
you agree or disagree?
#change #character #appearance #towns #cities #government
#buildings #styles #identity

In this modern era, world is changing a lot as compared

to the past and construction is the assential part of this
modanization of cities. But I personally believe that
maintain traditional style is our first priority. In the
following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to
support my view.

However, everyone know that latest construction of

buildings only depends on the new methods and
main purpose of it is only atteractive look. Because if it
is not fullfill this requirment then this thing will directly
affects on the rental price of it. But traditional buildings
have it's own value and we can't judge it.
On the other hand , every coin has two sides " one is
positive while another is negative ". Construction of new
buildings in olden way requires lot of extra money and it
is also time consuming process. Even though, it is next
to impossible to fix all new animities in it.

However, traditional looks buildings have numerous

advantages than disadvantages. The main plus point is,
it reflects our cultural image. Even when new generation
see it at that time they realize the important of it. As per
the 2016 government report, some countries major
economy only depends on this type of infrastructures.
Because this type of things also attracts tourisum and it
is directly affects the ratio of economical gdp. Due to this
reason most of the international companies now focus
on the cultural projects.

To conlude, If government will give more attenction on

cultural way construction rather than modern type of it
then it will be beneficial for the society as weel as for the
country. I have fully agree with this statement.

Submitted by rushipatel1953 on Fri Aug 14 2020

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Linking words
7
meeting the goal of 7 or more

Word repetition
0
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer

27 Grammar mistakes

0
4 paragraphs 10 280 words

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Overall5
Band Score
6
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COHERENCE AND COHESION: 4.0
8
4 Logical structure 9
4 Introduction & conclusion present
6 Supported main points
9 Accurate linking words
5 Variety in linking words

LEXICAL RESOURCE: 4.0

9 Varied vocabulary
4 Accurate spelling & word formation

GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 4.0

9 Mix of complex & simple sentences

4 Clear and correct grammar

TASK ACHIEVEMENT: 6.0

9 Complete response
6.5 Clear & comprehensive ideas
6 Relevant & specific examples
Appropriate word count

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