Para 1 (10 points)

Main point is clearly written with the main idea of the paragraph. 7
Subpoint A is clearly written and it corresponds well with the main idea of the par 7
Subpoint B is clearly written and it corresponds well with the main idea of the par 7
Explanation is effective 7
Evidence is effective and is correctly formatted 8
APA citation is used correctly (10 points)
All four paragraphs plus references are presented (10 points)
Sentences are complete (10 points)
Overall impression (10 points)
Para 2 (10 points) Total
4 11
4 11
4 11
6 13
8 16
8
3
7
7
Total score (out of 140 87
Total score (out of 10062.142857143