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Descriptive Writing Paragraphs 20
Descriptive Writing Paragraphs 20
At first, she doesn't consciously allow herself to think about this freedom. The
knowledge reaches her wordlessly and symbolically, via the "open window"
through which she sees the "open square" in front of her house. The repetition
of the word "open" emphasizes possibility and a lack of restrictions.
She observes these patches of blue sky without registering what they might
mean. Describing Louise's gaze, Chopin writes, "It was not a glance of
reflection, but rather indicated a suspension of intelligent thought." If she had
been thinking intelligently, social norms might have prevented her from such a
heretical recognition. Instead, the world offers her "veiled hints" that she
slowly pieces together without even realizing she is doing so.
This story can be uncomfortable to read because, on the surface, Louise seems
to be glad that her husband has died. But that isn't quite accurate. She thinks
of Brently's "kind, tender hands" and "the face that had never looked save with
love upon her," and she recognizes that she has not finished weeping for him.
Once she allows herself to recognize her approaching freedom, she utters the
word "free" over and over again, relishing it. Her fear and her
uncomprehending stare are replaced by acceptance and excitement. She looks
forward to "years to come that would belong to her absolutely."
"There would be no one to live for her during those coming years; she would live for
herself. There would be no powerful will bending hers in that blind persistence with
which men and women believe they have a right to impose a will upon a fellow-
creature."
Note the phrase men and women. Louise never catalogs any specific offenses
Brently has committed against her; rather, the implication seems to be that
marriage can be stifling for both parties.
When the doctors determine that Louise "died of heart disease -- of joy that
kills," the reader immediately recognizes the irony. It seems clear that her
shock was not joy over her husband's survival, but rather distress over losing
her cherished, newfound freedom. Louise did briefly experience joy -- the joy
of imagining herself in control of her own life. And it was the removal of that
intense joy that led to her death.
His face was craggy but kind- a life filled with stories hidden
beneath the wrinkles that framed his eyes. I watched him as he
walked, his steps light despite the weight of all he had seen.
The sun beat down from above, its rays glinting off broken
columns and walls that told stories of a forgotten time. Here
was evidence of an ancient civilization that had disappeared
into history.
All was silent except for a few birds singing in the distance and
the occasional avalanche tumbling down one of the nearby
slopes. Everywhere I looked, there were breathtaking views and
a sense of awe at being so close to such a powerful force of
nature.
Descriptive Paragraph Example 11:
The sun was setting, painting the sky in vibrant shades of
orange, pink and purple. The clouds were streaked with golden
light, completing the brilliant spectacle that was taking place all
around me.
The air was sweet with the scent of fresh-cut hay and the
buzzing of bees. There was a beauty that could only be found in
nature, a timeless reminder of the power and magnificence of
the world around us.
It felt like a place stuck in time, where one could take refuge
from the frenetic pace of modern life and find solace in nature.
The trees stood tall and proud, their leaves rustling in the
gentle breeze. Everywhere I looked, there was evidence of life;
from the scurrying squirrels to the buzzing insects, it seemed as
if everything had been frozen in perfect harmony and balance.
It was an enchanting sight that made me feel profoundly alive.
Everything was still and silent; it felt like I was the only living
soul for miles. With each breath, the cold air filled my lungs,
and I savoured this moment of peace, so pure and untouched
by modern life. This was nature at its finest, a reminder of how
fragile our existence is.