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an advisory capacity for the past nine months. He has told me of his wishes to expand his knowledge
in the field of Materials Science and Engineering in which he has actively involved himself in
research. I hope that my view will help your admissions committee make a positive decision in his
application to your prestigious university.
His research bent of mind became obvious when he worked on the development of Crystal Graph
Convolutional Neural Networks models for high-throughput prediction of material properties as an
intern under my supervision. He undertook this highly ambitious research project with enthusiasm,
confidence and professionalism.
I was surprised to see how much work he put into this project. He tried to get the best possible
synergies between collaborating teams, working tirelessly on his new model that predicted properties
for inorganic materials using physics-based deep-learning techniques. It required a lot from him and
it showed when you watched him diligently perform tasks at hand. Even though he faced challenges
in improving efficiency due to the scarcity of data for many properties, he continued persistently with
other methods to overcome them. He was motivated to work on this project because of his
fascination with the idea that by accelerating material development we can extend many fields,
especially electronics and renewable energy. During his second scientific undertaking, he worked on
developing a model to predict the voltage of materials based on structural and bonding
characteristics.
Using deep learning for this project helped him understand what goes behind these black boxes so
that any modified models perform better. He explored the domain particularly well to come up with
the idea of introducing global variables for accurately predicting voltage and high-throughput
screening of materials. His interest in the fields of Solid-state physics, Electronic materials,
Electrochemistry and Computational Techniques came particularly useful as he was able to provide
valuable insights at crucial junctures of the project. This project, like its previous one, would
accelerate the pace of materials discovery of energy storage materials for supporting renewable
energy transition. Such undertaking of application-based projects, with equal impetus on the quality
of research and novelty being developed, speak volumes about his academic virtues.
His work ethic has impressed me, and his unrelenting quest for knowledge tells me that he will only
improve his performance in the master’s journey. Campuses all over America have very diverse
student bodies--a sign of healthy academia where people from every walk of life are welcome to
learn together as equals under one roof. In xxxxxxxxx , I see a person who has always struck a
proportioned balance with his social and academic life. Almost invariably, during our group
meetings, I would find him earnestly communicating and helping his peers, co-interns, and lab
associates. This led me to the belief that he can carry himself well with peers and he possesses the
ability to extend help whenever presented with the opportunity to do so.
In conclusion, I believe that xxxxxxxxx is just the kind of student who would fit into the category of
student you would like to feature in your research group. He ticks almost every box in the
qualifications of an ideal student. I have enjoyed working with this gifted young person. I strongly
recommend him to the MS program in the Department of Material Science & Engineering at
University of California, Los Angeles. I do this wholeheartedly and without any reservation. I am
sure that he would be an asset to your institution. His perseverance, diligence and citizenship
qualities would add significantly to your already impressive campus.
MIT Academic LOR Sample and Critique from Admission Office
It is a great pleasure for me to recommend David for admission to MIT. He is one of the most
extraordinary students I have encountered in 20 years of teaching. I taught David A.P. Calculus
last year as a tenth grader, and he was one of the very top students in an extremely able group
of mostly seniors. He has a high aptitude for math and was very much involved in his work,
applying himself with persistence and dedication and often going beyond the regular class
assignments.
David’s abiding interest, however, is computer science. He has developed a series of “strands”
for use in providing computerized drill and review in the basic skills and techniques of algebra
and arithmetic and has recently adapted these to other subjects. David’s work in this area has
been so original and significant that he has published a paper on it and delivered several lectures
to professionals in other parts of the country. This is a phenomenal accomplishment for anyone,
especially a young man in rural Arkansas. It is also worth noting that both last year and this
year David taught computer programming to a tenth-grade class of mine for two weeks. He
took over completely, preparing lectures, assignments, and tests with great care and thought.
His lectures were clear and well organized, and it was obvious that he had expended a great
deal of effort to make the course the success that it was.
Critique: Excellent! This recommendation is filled with comments from someone who clearly
knows this student well. We get a clear sense for not only David’s intellectual capacities, but
also emotional maturity. His genuine love for computer programming comes through in this
teacher’s description. We also realize that he is pushing academic boundaries in his community
and making opportunities for himself—a trait that is especially important for a candidate
seeking college admissions a year early.
During high school, I tried making batteries with fruits like lemons to light an LED. These experiments would often
fail because of insufficient power. This led me to try making a cell using multiple fruits connected in series. I also
experimented with different anode materials like magnesium from a tape recorder, aluminium foil, iron nails etc. I
was keen to maximise the output without needing to use more lemons, which introduced me to the fundamental
theories of electrochemistry. I learnt about the electrochemical series and energy storage devices like batteries
and capacitors. I was fascinated to see how changes in electrode, electrolyte chemistry and surface area affected
the performance of these devices. Using this new knowledge, I performed the same experiment using brined fruits,
replaced the electrodes with copper and magnesium, and achieved a much-higher potential.
When it was time for me to pick a direction to continue my education, it was clear to me that my interest in
electrochemistry and materials would have to be realised in my undergraduate major. In light of deep-rooted
interest, I decided to pursue undergraduate study in Metallurgical and Materials Engineering from xxxxx, an
institute that is placed among the best in this field in India.
During my undergraduate study in Metallurgical and Materials Engineering, I underwent rigorous coursework in
Solid-State Physics, Physical metallurgy, Ceramics, Composites and Polymers. Due to my interest in
electrochemistry and batteries, I took electives in Energy storage Technology and Hydrogen-Fuel cells. To
supplement these college courses, I attended online courses in Materials processing and development,
Nanotechnology and Functional Ceramics, Material Data Science and Informatics, Molecular Spectroscopy, Neural
Networks, and Deep Learning. Together, these courses form the sound foundation that informs my decision to
progress my career toward materials for energy.
In the summer of my 2nd year, I was fortunate to work under the guidance of Dr. xxx at the National University of
Singapore (NUS). I was tasked with designing the reactor for the synthesis of carbon nanomaterials using
computational modelling of energy-mass transport and the mechanism of chemical reactions. The understanding
that I gathered from this experience gave me the ability to accurately identify the parameters that need to be
tweaked to make carbon dioxide reduction more efficient and controllable. During the process of identifying
materials for the reactor, I came across silicon obtained via molten salt electrolysis used as an alternative anode
for Li-ion batteries.
My interest in alternate anodes for Li-ion batteries led me to initiate computational research into coated silicon
nanotube and nanowire studies. In this study, I identified parameters affecting these anode materials during the
lithiation/de-lithiation cycle. Results revealed that coating thickness and lithium concentration are the dominant
factors influencing tensile strength and ductility in silicon nanostructures. I presented these findings at the
International Conference for Nanoscience and Nanotechnology 2021 and published the xxxx. I am in the process
of drafting the final paper for this study. The project gave me the opportunity to understand the underlying
mechanisms of lithiation-delithiation cycles in electrodes and the electrochemical properties of nanomaterials. The
software used also enabled me to explore statistical mechanics.
After my 3rd year, I worked under Dr. xxxat the University of Toronto (UofT) to create a new Crystal Graph
Convolutional Neural Networks model to accelerate material discovery. The algorithm was extended to battery
materials with changes to identify the relationship between capacity, volume and vacant space in lattice structures.
These experiences were instrumental in motivating me to research further in the field.
In order to reach the summit of industry-scale energy materials, it is necessary for me first to receive an education
that focuses on the research of energy materials. The state-of-the-art research conducted at xxxxxx institutes in
electrochemical energy storage and computational material science attracts me the most. The research that I
performed at NUS and UofT was made possible by their latest computational facilities, which are developed in
tandem with the facilities used by scientists performing cutting-edge research in computational materials science.
At MESC+, I wish to utilise equipment of the same calibre, furthermore under a collaborative and research-oriented
environment available in but a few universities across the world.
Prof. xxxxxx (Université de Picardie Jules Verne) work on multiscale modelling and artificial intelligence for battery
manufacturing fascinates me. My experience with coarse-grained Molecular Dynamics (MD), Monte Carlo (MC)
and Discrete Element Method (DEM) from my previous projects helps me relate to his current project, "ARTISTIC".
Also, I am familiar with the application of machine learning relevant to his ongoing projects to optimise electrode
processing. Similarly, Prof. xxxx (Université Paul Sabatier) research on Mxenes and other multivalent electrodes
align closely with my interest in developing high energy and power density electrochemical devices. His work on
exfoliation and delamination techniques to synthesise two-dimensional MXenes from molten salts is interesting. I
believe my experience studying molten salt nanomaterial synthesis and nanostructured ceramics can supplement
Prof. Patrice Simon's research in MXene based supercapacitors and batteries. I would be very obliged to work as
a Research Assistant under (but not limited to) Prof. xxxx and Prof. xxxx.
At xxxx, my peer group came from diverse backgrounds. I often sought advice and mentorship from my college
alumni, each of them having taken different career directions. My exposure to this diversity was foundational in
helping me understand problem statements across disciplines. I am confident of the diverse environment that I will
be part of during my graduate studies in Europe, and I am sure that this environment will enable me to tackle an
array of problems with ease considering that my peer group will consist of individuals that come from diverse
academic and social backgrounds. With the European Union leading the way to carbon neutrality by 2050, batteries
and other energy devices have a key role to play. This opens a large number of opportunities and resources to
conduct research and contribute to the field. Initiatives like BIG-MAP and ARTISTIC which are part of the Battery
2030+ roadmap fit my research interests in the field. In addition, established companies transitioning towards clean
energy and the rise of various startups will provide me with the opportunity to transfer my expertise to real-world
products to tackle climate change.
Interaction with Prof. xxx (Drexel University) made me realise the immensity of upcoming advancements in the
renewable energy sector and learn about the xxxx program that trains students to lead the transition. The program
provides the opportunity to gain experience with industry leaders such as Bosch, Umicore, Renault, Total, E4V,
SAFT and Solvay. Being face-to-face with industry-defining researchers in Europe will enable me to understand
the challenges in the global scale implementation of renewable energy. The knowledge and experience that I will
thus gain will help me perform my part in accelerating the utilisation of renewable energy among underserved
sections of the community.
These factors inform my decision to apply abroad for higher education, especially to xxxx in materials for energy
storage and conversion. Because of the persistence and dedication that I have thoroughly demonstrated
throughout my academic and scientific explorations, I am confident of my capability to complete the advanced
academic work that will be part of my graduate studies in Europe. My future goal is to engineer and help mass-
produce industry-scale renewable energy products. I am enthusiastic about working in the energy industry and
using my knowledge of computational engineering and advanced scientific research to identify ideal precursors
and parameters for the widespread implementation of Li-ion batteries. More specifically, my goal is to work for a
battery company as an engineer cum scientist or an R&D engineer.
This is an example Statement of Objectives of a student who successfully enrolled
in graduate school at MIT in CSAIL.
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Developed understanding of targeted strategies (enhanced bioavailability and specificity) over chemotherapy.
• Identified small-molecule (M.Wt.<1kDa, less hetero atoms and rotatable bonds, improved excretion) targeting inhibitors
for advanced carcinoma; Concluded with a presentation on the research paper ‘In Vivo Evaluation of Ligand
Targeted Drug Conjugates for Cancer Therapy’.
Laboratory of Translational Chemistry and Drug Discovery, University of Delhi Feb’21-Apr’21
Research Trainee, Guide: Dr. xxxx, Department of Chemistry, Miranda House
• Synthesized a series of novel hydroxyethylamine (HEA) based fluorinated therapeutics for the treatment of Malaria
(Plasmodium falciparum species); Purified the analogues using column chromatography, HPLC and characterized them
using spectroscopic techniques such as UV-Vis, IR, NMR, and Mass spectroscopy.
• Introduction of -CF3 , -SCF3 , -SF5 , -OCF3 side groups to the analogues improved the lipophilicity, metabolic stability,
and extended circulation time, thus increasing their targeting efficacy against malarial aspartic proteases.
Project Experience
Guide: Dr.xx, University of California, Davis Sept’21-Present
‘Targeted Drug Delivery System in the Treatment of Lung Cancer and its possible interaction with COVID-19’
• Identified the upregulated growth factor receptors (GFRs) in non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC) and COVID-19;
Proposed repurposing of existing lung cancer targeted therapies (specifically targeting these GFRs) to treat COVID-19.
• Conduct a systematic meta-analysis (data in PubMed, Embase, Medline, DrugBank from 2016-2021 and visualize it using
Tableau) based on popularity, effectivity, side effects, and accessibility of the proposed strategy in developing nations.
Guide: Dr.xx, Department of Chemistry, Miranda House Jun’21-Jul’21
‘Review: Synthesis, properties, and applications of alkaline earth metal titanate perovskite nanoparticles’
• Researched existing literature (from 2010-2021) to summarize the structure, properties, and characterization of MTiO3
(M=Mg, Ca, Sr, Ba) perovskite nanoparticles and its application in healthcare, cosmetics, and targeted drug delivery.
• Key finding: efficacy of green techniques (sonochemical, hydrothermal, molten salt) over the traditional methods (sol-gel,
and non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC); communicated to Journal of Molecular Structure
• Identified molecular biomarkers (blood, serum, Carcinoembryonic antigen (CEA), plasma metabolites) as early drug
targets for therapeutic intervention to monitor cancer progression, and predict the chances of disease recurrence.
Education
Miranda House, University of Delhi (NIRF Rank: 1) 2018 – 2021
B.Sc. (Hons.) Chemistry, CGPA-x/10 (summa cum laude) New Delhi, India
• Minor in Mathematics
• Relevant Courses: Organic and Inorganic Chemistry, Quantum Chemistry, Molecular Modelling & Drug Design, Green
Research Interests
• Organic Synthesis, Drug Design, Chemical Biology, Nanomedicine, Green Chemistry, Computational Chemistry
Laboratory Experience
• Recrystallization, thin layer chromatography, derivatization, gravimetric and qualitative semi-micro analysis of mixtures
• Titrations, spectroscopy, colorimetry, rotary evaporation, microwave synthesis, Western Blot, RT-PCR, flow cytometry
• UV-Visible Spectrophotometer (Shimadzu UV-240 model), flash chromatography (Yamazen), SemiPrep HPLC (Gilson)
Honours and Awards
University of Delhi 2018-2021
st
1 Position, Paper Presentation
Molecular Modelling is Changing the Landscape of Drug Discovery
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• Chemistry in COVID-19 Era
• Climate Change and Natural Disasters
3rd Position, Poster Presentation
• Radioactivity: Nuclear Waste Management
• Sustainable Development Goal 6-Clean Water and Sanitation
La Martiniere Girls’ College 2016-2018
• Mrs. Farida Abraham Labour Durus Medal for effort and perseverance: For my tenure as the Vice Head Girl
• Dr. V.B.S Chauhan Medal and Shield: Best student in Chemistry in Grade 11 and 12
• Mrs. Swati Bishnoi Memorial Medal: Best student in Mathematics in Grade 11 and 12
• Dr. (Mrs.) Inderjeet Kaur Pahwa Medal: Best Student in a batch of 200+ students
Leadership Experience
Mridang, Indian Dance Society of Miranda House, University of Delhi 2018-2021
Logistics Head and Member
• Mentored 30+ students; Won 25+ group folk dance competitions nationally; Organized 15+ events including
Tarangini-annual classical and group folk dance competition, which witnessed 40+ participants from across India.
• Got recognized as one of the top 3 dance societies across the University of Delhi-a first since the society was established.
different science departments to expose them to innovative and trending scientific research.
• Led a team of 10 members; Published 3 and edited 70+ articles on interdisciplinary sciences to be uploaded on the
international event held in conjunction with the U.N Day of Women and Girls in Science.
• Conducted 5+ events in 12 months with the participation of 10+ colleges across the University of Delhi.
cultural events including the first-ever Farida Abraham Memorial National Debate and Quiz which witnessed the
participation of 12+ schools nationally.
Volunteering Experience
X, Fostering interdisciplinarity of Biology with other STEMM fields Scientific Sep’21-Present
Communications Coordinator
• Create content and implement effective digital marketing strategies to promote the E-learning platform; Conduct
interactive webinars and interviews with world-renowned scientists; Published 3 articles on the official website of
BioXspace; Formulated research projects focusing on healthcare and climate change.
X, Free access to education (NGO) HR and Jan’22-Present
Logistics Department
• Maintain records of 20+ academic departments; Review and recommend policies to improve the functioning of the
organization; Conduct new volunteer orientations, employee relations counselling, and administrative meetings.
Conferences Attended
Miranda House, University of Delhi 2018-2021
• IUPAC Symposium on ‘Empowering Diversity in Science’
• International Conference on ‘Chemistry-the catalyst for change’
• National Conclave on ‘Biodiversity for Everyone’s Life’
• National Webinar on ‘Learnings from the Corona Pandemic’
• Bridge Course in Laboratory Safety and Handling of Equipment
Department of Biotechnology, Ministry of Science and Technology, Government of India Jan’20
• International Summit on Women in STEM -‘Visualizing the Future: New Skylines’ - A 2-day summit that addressed
Skills
Languages: English (Professional, IELTS Band Score: xx), Hindi and Kashmiri (Native), Sanskrit
Technical: MS Office, ArgusLab, ChemSketch, ChemDraw, BioRender, Tableau
Soft: teamwork, scientific t emperament, a ll-rounder, l eadership, p rofessionalism, t ime m anagement, confidence
Hobbies: Indian classical (Kathak and Bharatanatyam) dance, badminton, embroidery, Mandala art, travelling