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NAME JUNI ARTA CECILIA SRN 202341500003

SIMANULLANG

Title of video, Seed dispersal Vocabularies for New Vocabularies

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Mawar putri asih
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Content Introduction: The - -

introduction skillfully
establishes the context
for the seed dispersal
topic by portraying it
as an essential
mechanism necessary
for the survival and
growth of plant
species. It briefly
describes the essential
external elements—
such as wind, water,
and animals—that play
a role in seed
dissemination and
highlights its passive
character. It also
describes the three
primary seed dispersal
strategies—
animochory,
hydrochory, and
zoochory—and offers a
structured framework
for further
investigation of each
strategy. All things
considered, the
introduction gives a
succinct synopsis of
the subject and
successfully draws in
the audience by
highlighting the
importance of seed
dispersal in plant
ecology and ecosystem
dynamics.
Discussion: The
discourse offers an all-
encompassing
investigation of seed
dispersal,
encompassing its
importance, processes,
and instances. It
efficiently divides the
subject into three
primary approaches
(hydrochory, zoochory,
and animochory) and
describes each in detail
with pertinent features
and examples. The
conversation is
accessible to a broad
audience due to its
organization and ease
of comprehension.
There are a few places,
though, where the
clarity may be
strengthened. For
viewers who are not as
familiar with the
subject, providing
more thorough
explanations of each
dispersal method's
operation and
ecological
ramifications could
improve
comprehension.
Adding images or real-
world examples could
also help to further
clarify the ideas
covered, adding
interest to the text.
Overall, the
 conversation does a
good job of
emphasizing the
significance of seed
dispersal and offers
insightful information
about its methods and
ecological
Summary: The main
ideas covered in the
movie on seed
dispersal are briefly
summarized in the
summary. It succinctly
emphasizes the passive
aspect of seed
dissemination and
presents the three
primary techniques—
hydrochory, zoochory,
and animochory—as
well as their
distinguishing traits.
The examples given
aid in clarifying each
technique and improve
audience
comprehension. A brief
discussion of the
ecological relevance of
seed dispersal and its
part in ecosystem
dynamics, however,
would enhance the
summary. All things
considered, the
synopsis does a good
job of distilling the
main points of the film
and giving a clear
rundown of seed
dispersal's
mechanisms.
Fluency Overall, the paragraph
makes sense and
 effectively
communicates its
intended meaning. For
greater readability, the
flow may be enhanced
in several places,
though. Some
sentences are a little
challenging to follow
because they are long
and complicated.
Fluency might be
improved by
segmenting these
phrases into shorter,
more succinct ones.
Furthermore, a more
seamless transition
between concepts and
parts would enhance
the text's overall flow.
Although the text is
straightforward and
accessible overall,
fluency and readability
might be improved by
improving sentence
structure and
transitions.
Expression/ The text's performance
Performance and expression both
clearly and
successfully convey
the intended meaning.
The formal tone
maintained by the
language is appropriate
and professional,
making it ideal for
summarizing academic
or instructional topics.
Still, there's
opportunity for further
innovation and
participation. Adding
additional variation to
 the sentence structure
and utilizing vivid
imagery or descriptive
language can improve
the text's
expressiveness and
audience engagement.
Furthermore, using
persuasive or rhetorical
tactics could draw the
reader in even more
and emphasize
important ideas. All
things considered, the
text does a good job of
conveying the
information, but it
might be performed
and expressed with
greater originality and
flair.
Pronunciation There is no feature of
pronunciation to assess
because the text
presented is a video of
spoken dialogue. On
the other hand,
effective
communication would
depend on maintaining
clear enunciation,
suitable tempo, and
appropriate stress on
key words if this were
a spoken presentation.
Furthermore, taking
into account elements
like emphasis, tone,
and intonation can
improve the delivery as
a whole and guarantee
that the audience
understands the content
correctly.
Intonation and There are inconsistent
Punctuation intonation and
punctuation marks in
the provided text,
which may make it
harder to read and
understand. Intonation
marks—commas and
periods, for example—
indicate pauses and
breaks in speech,
which helps the reader
follow along with the
text. Punctuation must
be consistent and
suitable in order to
facilitate
comprehension and
convey meaning. The
language would flow
better and be easier to
understand if
punctuation was used
when needed, and
suitable tone was used.
Additionally, spoken
speech can be made
more expressive and
effective by employing
intonation markers to
indicate emphasis or
inflection points. In
general, improving the
tone and punctuation
would improve the
text's consistency and
intelligibility.
Grammar Range A variety of
and Accuracy grammatical structures
are displayed in the
text, which also
exhibits an overall high
degree of accuracy. For
better coherence and
clarity, there are
certain instances of
grammatical faults and
 uncomfortable
phrasings, though.
Confusion results from
some sentences'
excessive complexity
or lack of subject-verb
agreement. The general
grammatical accuracy
and readability of the
content could be
improved by making
sure that the tenses are
used consistently and
by improving the
sentence patterns. The
writing can be made
even more fluid and
coherent by paying
attention to verb
conjugation and word
choice. Although the
work has a respectable
variety of grammatical
structures overall, it
would be more
effective if accuracy
and clarity were
improved.
Suggestions for creator: Here are some ideas to make the text better:

1. Clarity: Make sure the intended audience can easily grasp the text. Simplify
difficult sentences and steer clear of technical jargon or language that could be
confusing to visitors.
2. Structure: Use logical content organization with distinct titles or sections to help
readers navigate the text. This enhances retention and comprehension.
3. Engagement: To draw viewers in and hold their interest throughout the entire video,
use captivating components like images, instances, or tales.
4. Consistency: Keep the formatting, tone, and style of the text consistent. This
contributes to the presentation's professionalism and coherence.
NAME JUNI ARTA CECILIA SRN 202341500003
SIMANULLANG

Title of video, Seed dispersal Vocabularies for New Vocabularies

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Ariesty maharani
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Content Introduction: The - -

video's introduction
gives a quick rundown
of the subject of seed
dispersal while
highlighting its
importance for
ecosystem diversity
and plant survival. It
provides context for
talking about the
several seed-dispersal
techniques that plants
use, like wind, water,
and animal dispersal.
The introduction does a
good job of drawing in
viewers and preparing
them for the instructive
material that will come
next.
Discussion: The talk in
the video explores the
complex seed-dispersal
systems that plants use.
It discusses a variety of
techniques, such as
animal, wind, and
water dispersal,
illustrating the various
ways in which plants
have developed to
guarantee the
dissemination of their
seeds. The film looks
at fruit and seed
characteristics that
promote effective
dispersal and sheds
light on the
evolutionary processes
at work. The talk
emphasizes the
significance of seed
distribution in
preserving ecological
diversity and fostering
plant survival by
examining these
processes. All in all,
the conversation is
interesting,
educational, and does a
good job of conveying
the difficulties
involved in seed
dissemination.
Summary: The video's
essential points on seed
dispersal are briefly
summarized in the
synopsis. It draws
attention to important
details like the several
ways that plants
disperse, such as wind,
water, and animal
 dispersal. The
significance of
comprehending seed
dispersal for plant
survival and ecological
variety is also
mentioned in the
summary. It succinctly
and clearly summarizes
the key points made in
the film, giving
viewers a quick
summary.
Fluency The essential ideas of
the film on seed
dispersal are
communicated
succinctly and
efficiently in the
summary. Because
each bullet point is
succinct but
informative, the
audience may easily
understand it. The use
of simple,
unambiguous language
improves readability
and comprehension.
Overall, the summary
does a good job of
succinctly and cogently
expressing the video's
content.
Expression/ There isn't a clear
Performance performance
component to assess
because the summary
is written text. On the
other hand, the
emotion and
performance would
depend on the
speaker's delivery,
tone, and interaction
 with the audience if
this were given
verbally or by video. A
speaker could improve
expression and
performance by
making eye contact
with the audience,
making gestures, and
using intonation to
highlight important
points while keeping a
steady tempo for
intelligibility. These
components help create
an engaging
presentation that
conveys the
information and
maintains the
audience's interest.
Pronunciation There is no
pronunciation to assess
because the summary
is written. It would be
crucial for the speaker
to pronounce the
phrases precisely and
properly if this were to
be delivered verbally
or by video. This
guarantees that the
content will be easily
understood by the
audience. Additionally,
the presentation would
seem more credible
and professional if any
technical terms
pertaining to seed
distribution were
spoken correctly.
Intonation and The summary does a
Punctuation good job of conveying
structure and purpose
 through tone and
punctuation.
Punctuation, like as
commas and periods,
can convey tone and
help the reader
understand how the
text should be read
aloud or understood.
The summary uses
periods to punctuate
each bullet point
appropriately,
signaling a stop and a
change in attention to
the following sentence.
Within the bullet
points, commas are
utilized to divide
concepts and make the
flow of content clearer.
Overall, the summary's
readability and clarity
are enhanced by the
use of tone and
punctuation.
Grammar Range A decent variety of
and Accuracy grammatical structures
and accuracy are
shown in the summary.
Sentences are put
together using a range
of grammatical
components, including
subject-verb
agreement, noun
phrases, and
prepositional phrases,
with clarity and
coherence.
Furthermore, the
summary uses verb
tenses consistently,
which improves
reading and
comprehension.
 Furthermore, there are
no grammatical
mistakes or unclear
sentences in the
summary, ensuring
accuracy in
communicating the
intended information.
Overall, the summary's
precision and
grammatical range help
it effectively convey
the main ideas of the
seed distribution
movie.
Suggestions for creator: Visual Aids: To improve comprehension and engagement,
include visual aids like diagrams, animations, or real-world video. When used in
conjunction with spoken explanations, visual aids can effectively augment the
information and increase its accessibility to a wider audience.
Case Studies with Illustrations: Provide concrete illustrations and case studies of
plants and the ways in which their seeds spread. Examples from real-world situations
aid in the illustration of ideas and help viewers relate to and remember them better.
Engaging Components: To actively engage viewers and promote involvement,
incorporate interactive components like polls, quizzes, and interactive simulations.
Deeper learning and longer viewer retention are two benefits of interactive material.

NAME JUNI ARTA CECILIA SRN 202341500003

SIMANULLANG

Title of video, Seed dispersal Vocabularies for New Vocabularies

link created by Biology + Meaning/ (General) +
Selvia anggraeni
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Synonym

Content Introduction: The - -

introduction gives a
quick rundown of seed
dispersal mechanisms,
detailing the different
ways that seeds are
moved from their
parent plants to aid in
reproduction. It does a
good job of setting the
stage for the
conversation that
happens in the
transcript. For
consistency and clarity,
there are a few
grammatical and
structural errors that
should be fixed.
Discussion:
Explanation of the
many seed dispersal
mechanisms is
provided, including
wind, animal, gravity,
and explosive
distribution. Examples
are provided for each
technique, providing a
thorough grasp of the
various ways that seeds
are distributed in the
natural world.
However, it is difficult
to follow the transcript
smoothly because it
has a number of
grammatical errors and
is unclear in certain
places. Enhancing the
arrangement and
lucidity of the
conversation would
augment its efficacy in
delivering information
to the listeners.
Summary: The main
ideas about seed
dispersal methods
covered in the
transcript are
succinctly summarized
in the summary. Along
with pertinent
 instances, it highlights
the primary dispersal
mechanisms, including
wind, animal, gravity,
and explosive
dissemination. To
guarantee coherence
and clarity, the
summary might benefit
from a more succinct
and structured
presentation.
Correcting any
grammar mistakes
would also make the
summary easier to read
overall.
Fluency Many grammar
mistakes, fragmented
words, and uneven
wording make the
video unfluent. This
makes the debate less
clear and makes it
harder to understand.
Enhancing the
transcript's coherence,
syntax, and sentence
structure would
significantly increase
its overall fluency and
make it simpler to read
and comprehend.
Expression/ The performance and
Performance expression in the video
may be greatly
enhanced. Because of
the frequent
grammatical faults and
incomplete sentences,
the delivery is
unnatural and unclear.
Furthermore, there isn't
much focus or tone
variety, which could
 make it difficult for the
listener to remain
interested. The
performance quality
would be substantially
improved by
improving the
expression through the
use of more emotive
delivery and improved
grammar and
punctuation.
Pronunciation Since the offered video
is mainly text-based, it
is challenging to assess
pronunciation based on
it. However, if the
content is meant to be
presented orally, there
can be issues with
pronunciation because
of typos and improper
punctuation, which
could make the spoken
words difficult to
understand. As
effective
communication
depends on perfect
word pronunciation
and sound enunciation,
making sure that the
audience understands
what you're saying will
help them understand it
as well.
Intonation and The spoken material in
Punctuation the video is not as clear
or flows as it may be
because of the
improper punctuation
and inconsistent
intonation. Punctuation
directs speech's rhythm
and structure, whereas
 intonation is crucial for
meaning-transmission
and listener
involvement.
Enhancing these two
areas would improve
the presentation's
efficacy and
expressiveness while
also making it simpler
for the audience to
follow and
comprehend.
Grammar Range The grammar range
and Accuracy and accuracy displayed
in the video are
restricted. Throughout,
there are a lot of
grammatical mistakes,
such as unfinished
phrases, inconsistent
verb tenses, and
missing articles.
Ensuring proper
sentence structure, verb
agreement, and article
usage would improve
grammar accuracy and
improve the content's
overall coherence and
readability. A more
varied and interesting
presentation might also
result from using a
wider variety of
grammatical structures.
Suggestions for creator: Improve the discussion's cohesion and clarity as your main
goal. Divide difficult concepts into easier-to-understand chunks, and make sure the
material flows logically from one notion to the next. The audience would be able to
comprehend you better if you use clear and simple language.
Expression and Delivery: When presenting the topic, work on enhancing your
expression and delivery. In order to keep the audience interested and improve
comprehension, practice reading the transcript aloud while maintaining the proper
intonation, accent, and pace.
NAME JUNI ARTA CECILIA SRN 202341500003
SIMANULLANG

Title of video, Seed dispersal Vocabularies for New Vocabularies

link created by Biology + Meaning/ (General) +
Fitria Ananda tazkiya
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Content Introduction: On the - -

other hand, it appears
from the attached video
that the introduction
consists of the
speaker's name, role,
and presumably area of
specialty. It then
discusses music and a
subject pertaining to
seed dispersal.

More details or a
lengthier version of the
introduction would be
required to give a more
comprehensive review.
Discussion: The
offered video clip
appears to be rather
short and to be devoid
of comprehensive
details regarding the
seed dispersal debate.
On the other hand, the
title and the host's
introduction imply that
the video is probably a
part of a YouTube
channel or series that
specializes in
instructional content.

The use of background

music could suggest a
 more conversational or
casual presenting style
that aims to grab the
audience's interest.
Overall, the assessment
indicates that although
though the short video
clip isn't very long, it
does hint at an
informative talk about
seed dispersal that may
be meant for a wide
YouTube audience.
Summary: Although
there are no specifics
mentioned in the short
video excerpt, it
appears that the topic
of seed dispersal is
covered. The informal
format is also
mentioned in the
summary; it may be a
component of a
YouTube educational
series meant to interest
a wide audience.
Fluency The primary ideas of
the video's structure
and content are
communicated in an
understandable and
straightforward
manner. All things
considered, the
synopsis effectively
conveys the crucial
details included in the
given video clip.

Expression/ The reader will find it

Performance easy to understand the
main points of the
video because of the
engaging and clear
 expression.
Furthermore, the
synopsis exhibits a
strong sense of timing,
guaranteeing that the
content is easily
readable and flows
naturally. All things
considered, the
performance in
encapsulating the video
is praiseworthy,
skillfully retaining its
essence while
preserving coherence
and clarity.

Pronunciation The spoken material in

the video is not as clear
or flows as it may be
because of the
improper punctuation
and inconsistent
intonation. Punctuation
directs speech's rhythm
and structure, whereas
intonation is crucial for
meaning-transmission
and listener
involvement.
Enhancing these two
areas would improve
the presentation's
efficacy and
expressiveness while
also making it simpler
for the audience to
follow and
 comprehend.

Intonation and Since intonation is

Punctuation more important for
spoken language, it
isn't expressed directly.
Punctuation, however,
is essential for
conveying emphasis,
pauses, and the video's
pace. The synopsis
employs suitable
punctuation, skillfully
employing commas,
periods, and dashes to
organize the phrases
and guarantee lucidity.
Overall, the
punctuation makes it
easier to read and
understand the video.
Grammar Range With proper use of
and Accuracy verb tenses, sentence
structures, and word
order, the synopsis
exhibits a strong
command of grammar.
The sentences are
written clearly and
succinctly, and there
are no obvious
grammatical flaws. In
order to precisely
express the
information, the
summary also skillfully
makes use of a variety
of grammatical
structures, including
simple and
complicated sentences.
Overall, the summary's
precision and breadth
of language are
excellent, which adds
to its coherence and
 clarity.
Suggestions for creator: Invite viewers to express their opinions and experiences
about the distribution of seeds by posing questions and inviting audience participation.
This has the potential to increase audience involvement and a sense of community.
Consistency and Regularity: Keep up a consistent posting schedule for fresh content
and set aside time each week to upload videos. This will encourage viewers to return
for more content and help cultivate a devoted following.
Seek Feedback: Pay attention to what visitors have to say and incorporate it into your
next article. To get comments and input from the audience, think about making
surveys, polls, or comment areas.

NAME JUNI ARTA CECILIA SRN 202341500003

SIMANULLANG

Title of video, Seed dispersal Vocabularies for New Vocabularies

link created by Biology + Meaning/ (General) +
Cut Intan Seramaidra
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Content Introduction: A - -
synopsis of the
YouTube video is
given at the opening,
along with information
about the presenter's
goal to clarify seed
dispersal. It might be
enhanced, though, by
providing a more
explicit statement
about the goal or
intended viewership of
the video. It would be
more effective to make
these ideas clear and
make sure that the
language and spelling
are correct in the
introduction.
Discussion: The
video's discussion
section explores the
many seed dispersal
techniques as described
by her. It includes
dissemination by
animals, humans,
water, wind, and
gravity. Fruits that fall
owing to gravity, seeds
with wings for wind
dispersal, and buoyant
seeds for water
dispersal are only a
few examples used to
illustrate each
technique. It is clear
from the debate that
there are many
different seed
distribution methods in
nature. Nevertheless,
the transcript is riddled
with grammatical and
typographical problems
that make it difficult to
read and understand.
The conversation
would be of higher
quality overall if these
problems were
addressed.
Summary: This
summary summarizes a
seed dispersion
YouTube video. The
essential details are
succinctly stated,
including the identity
of the speaker, the
subject of seed
dispersal, and the many
approaches—wind,
water, animals,
humans, and gravity—
that are covered. The
lecturer gives a brief
explanation of each
 technique and provides
examples. However,
the summary might be
improved for
readability and clarity
as there are a few small
typographical and
grammatical mistakes.
All in all, it offers a
succinct synopsis of
the video's material.
Fluency Many grammar
mistakes, typos, and
sentence fragments
make the video
unfluent. These factors
make understanding
difficult and obstruct
the flow of
information. There are
also certain instances
of ambiguous or
insufficient
explanations, which
further undermine the
text's overall
consistency. The
video's fluency might
be substantially
increased by making
sure the story is
cohesive, enhancing
sentence structure, and
using better grammar.
Expression/ The performance and
Performance expression in the video
show a few things that
could be done better.
Intan Seramaid makes
an effort to explain
seed dispersal, but his
delivery is unclear and
unconfident. The
presentation is
hampered by the
 numerous pauses,
repeats, and instances
of tripping over words.
The film also has a lot
of typographical and
grammatical mistakes,
which further impedes
the expression's clarity.
Intan should practice
her speech, paying
attention to her
articulation, tempo,
and overall
presentation, in order
to improve her
performance. Making
edits to the video to
improve its grammar
and clarity would also
make it seem more
professional.
Pronunciation Inconsistent and
occasionally
ambiguous
pronunciation can be
heard in the video.
Even though Intan
makes an effort to
communicate the
information on seed
dispersal, there are a
number of instances
where terminology and
technical terms are
mispronounced. These
mistakes could make it
harder to grasp and
take away from the
presentation as a
whole. Intan could
benefit from practicing
pronouncing technical
words correctly and
paying attention to
clarity and enunciation
in order to enhance
 pronunciation. It would
also improve general
comprehension and
fluency to concentrate
on appropriate
emphasis and
intonation.
Intonation and The presentation is not
Punctuation as clear or flows as it
should because of the
video's improper
intonation and
punctuation.
Inconsistent intonation,
or the rise and fall of
pitch throughout
speech, results in a
monotonous delivery.
Punctuation is also
either missing or used
incorrectly, which
makes it difficult to
understand the
structure of sentences
and phrases. This
inconsistent use of
punctuation adds to
speech that is jumbled
and disconnected. In
order to make
improvements, Intan
should concentrate on
using suitable
intonation patterns to
highlight important
ideas and raise
awareness. Making
sure that punctuation is
right will also help
with sentence structure
and comprehension.
Grammar Range In the video, there is a
and Accuracy severe lack of precision
and range in grammar.
Throughout, there are a
 lot of grammatical
mistakes, such as
improper verb
conjugations, missing
articles, improper word
choice, and broken
sentences. The
presentation's cohesion
and clarity are
compromised by these
mistakes.
Comprehending is
further impeded by
instances of non-
standard language use
and ambiguous terms.
Intan should
concentrate on
grasping fundamental
grammatical rules and
sentence structure in
order to increase
grammar range and
accuracy. Errors can
also be effectively
identified and
corrected with the aid
of language learning
resources or peer input.
Suggestions for creator: Practice Pronouncing Words Correctly: Focus on
pronouncing words, particularly technical ones associated with seed dispersal, clearly
and precisely. To increase general comprehension, work on pronouncing each word
clearly.
Boost Fluency: Pay attention to speaking more fluently by cutting down on pauses,
repetitions, and word stumbles. To improve coherence and fluidity, practice speaking
at a moderate tempo.
Improve Your Punctuation and Intonation: To keep attention and express stress, pay
attention to intonation patterns. Make sure you use punctuation correctly as well to
help with sentence structure and comprehension.