Martinez 1

Juan Miguel Martinez

ENGL 1302; 223

Mr. Powers

April 5th 2024

Peer feedback 3

My peers, Emiliano Casana, and Saraih Vargas were the chose peers to do my peer

review on my first draft of my position paper. Both had a lot to say about my first draft and in

short, they both said that my essay is pretty good. Emiliano Castano though did realize that I

mistakenly used the word “I” in my thesis statement, and Saraih Vargas added in the citations

title to my work cited page. But overall, besides the few punctuation mistakes I made, they said

that overall it is a very good position paper. In my final draft, I will change my thesis to exclude

any first person pronouns. I will also watch out for any punctuational mistakes that I may

accidentally make during my writing process.