One of the aims of the Olympic Games is to improve relationships among

countries. Do you think they have achieved this? In no more than 250 words, write
an opinion essay to answer this question.

Agree:

Reasons that the Olympic

games can improve
relationships among
countries

Thanks to Olympic
MAIN IDEA1: Prevent games, a small country
countries from war. can improve the MAIN IDEA 2: Olympic
relationship with larger games bring people closer.
different countries.

Supporting Idea1: An Olympic

game can soothe the loathing Supporting
between two countries Supporting Idea2: When Supporting idea1: idea2: Many
they win a match at People will get People from
Olympics. cultural different
knowledge of the countries see a
other countries. match at a
same time.
Ex: The 2018 Winter Olympic, which took
place at Pyeongchang, South Korea,
highlighted the special event that is not
just a typical sporting occasion. However, Ex: When a group of
it was also an event that the two soccer or a famous Ex: The 2016
countries-South Korea and North Korea marathon athletic win a Summer Olympic
reconnected. match, people are likely was noticed that
to look for their match to there was over
That surprising was the North Korea’s watch, moreover, people 40.000 fan come to
government totally agreed to take part can find out where do Brazil in which took
in, Besides, people feel happier and easer they come from, about place that large,
when the Olympic event took placed in a their countries, cultural. special events.
peaceful atmosphere. Some fan even said that

Ex: Take , Hoang Xuan Vinh, a Vietnamese sports
shooter as an example, he was an only Vietnamese
athletic which won a gold mental in shooting sport
and it was the first time that National sport team of
Vietnam got the highest reward at an Olympics event.
After that even, Vietnam was known more in the
world. Some large countries such as Brasil
Ex: at a final soccer matches between Brazil
and Germany, People from two different
countries sat together, they talked nicely
and friendly without any reluctant. At the
final, when Braziller soccer team won the
match, many Germanys so sad, but they did
not show a rude to people from others
countries. According to Brasiller, they show
the repectation and the appreciation to
Germany players.