This article talks about how banning TikTok in America won’t do any good.

He starts by talking about

what are the dangerous things about the app and how the legislation is going overboard. He points out
the two main problems of the app which are collecting data from users in the U.S. and spreading anti-
American information which is a gateway for Chinese propaganda. He pointed out how the legislation
was a problem because it would make it easy for any foreign apps that they deemed a threat for the
national security to get banned. He then proposed a better solution for both problems which is having
the U.S. their own servers for their data.

For my opinion, yes, the legislation is going over the top as it gives the U.S. virtually unlimited power.
However, there is still a problem about the spread of anti-American.

The writer was trying to accomplish a win-win solution for both parties.

The writer’s article is convincing because it provided sources such as scientific data and the official
legislation act through blue text in the article.

This writer is trying to convince people to not ban TikTok but to convince them a different solution.

The writer formed a solution because the legislation is too overboard and the writer proposed TikTok to
have their own U.S. servers.