In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before.

Some people say an aging

population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has
more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the
disadvantages?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is a fact that improvements in public health and increasing an increase in the quality of life have led
people in many countries to live longer. While some people think that elderly populations bring some
benefits to the society, I believe that these the disadvantages of an aging population (vì population: n
đếm dc) are pale in comparison with its advantages because this trend creates an enormous burden on
healthcare systems.

On the one hand, older people who are active and healthy, independent, and with time on their hand
contribute in several ways to their families. They can provide childcare, financial, practical and emotional
support ( N không đếm dc) to family members. In many countries, especially Asian countries, older
people who have incomes from pensions or land usually are usually financial supporters, even the
economic pillars of multigenerational families. Without the accumulated wealth of grandparents, young
parents who get married early and are not financially stable can’t afford the costs of raising their child.

On the other hand, the elderly population creates an enormous burden on healthcare systems. As
people age, they suffer from more and more illnesses. Therefore, countries with rapidly aging
populations must allocate more money and resources to their health care systems, instead of devoting
the money to other important sectors such as business subsidies, education, and infrastructure.
Consequently, the overall quality of life in a country may decline due the overwhelmed healthcare
systems.

In conclusion, while older individuals can benefit to their families, I believe that the burden they place on
healthcare systems greatly outweighs this advantage because the need to allocate substantial funds to
meet the growing healthcare demands of an aging population can have detrimental effects on other vital
areas of society.

(chat gpt chấm 6.5 -7)

It is a well-established fact that improvements in public health and enhancements in the quality of life
have prolonged the lifespan of individuals in many countries. While some argue that elderly populations
bring certain benefits to society, I firmly believe that the drawbacks of an aging population far outweigh
its advantages, primarily due to the substantial burden it places on healthcare systems.

On the positive side, older individuals who maintain active and healthy lifestyles, possess independence,
and have ample time on their hands contribute to their families in multifaceted ways. They offer
childcare, financial support, practical assistance, and emotional guidance to family members. Particularly
in several Asian countries, elderly individuals, often with incomes from pensions or land, serve as vital
financial supporters and economic cornerstones of multigenerational families. Without the accumulated
wealth and support from grandparents, young parents, who may marry early and lack financial stability,
struggle to meet the expenses associated with raising their children.

Conversely, the aging population imposes an immense burden on healthcare systems. With advancing
age, individuals become more susceptible to various illnesses, necessitating increased allocation of
money and resources to healthcare. Unfortunately, this often occurs at the expense of other critical
sectors such as business subsidies, education, and infrastructure. Consequently, the overwhelming
demands on healthcare systems may lead to a decline in the overall quality of life within a country.

In conclusion, although older individuals can benefit to their families, I contend that the disadvantages
they pose to healthcare systems far outweigh this advantage. The substantial funds required to address
the escalating healthcare demands of an aging population can have detrimental effects on other vital
areas of society.

(chat gpt đề xuất bài sửa 7 -7.5)